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Omg please continue this story!

*drool* that was mighty intence, i like yozak better than conrart, and at least he'll treat murata as ken not as yuuri or as daijeka or how ever that name is written. and that will be a well deserved reward for murata, i can't wait for next chap to see how yozak will manipulate murata. ja ne!

Wow this is such an awesome story so far. I so wanna read more- there so much more potential for more yummy-ness. Update soon please!

*pout* I want more *big puppy eyes* pretty please, this story has such potensial, it was very intense, who knew conrard had it in him, okay well yeah, its no surprise the guy is a sadist,but still its a bit thrilling to actuali seeing him doing it. I'm not going to bother you telling you how i think the story could be longer, i already exposed that on my prior review, but honestly i would love if this was a long full blown story with lots of angst and drama, murata deserves a little spot light. even if he is only the moon the reflects the brilliance of a much brighter sun. a substitude that shines dimly in the dark when the sun its gone to give its light to others. *blink* that was so sappy, well now that i've embarased myself, think about it, it would be fun! *wink* ja ne!

OH! you've got to keep it going, Its the best i've read involving murata as the main character, and god and fans know there are far to few stories involving murata. Its very intriging, i for one love the onexpected pairing, i never liked the con/yuu, or mura/yuu, but conrard and murata certanly is a novelty to me and i rather like it. Its a surpricing, offer, specialy coming from shinou himself, to offer his exlover so willingly. I don't know how to go beyond this point either its your story and only you know whats going in your head, but you can try to take it easy, and start on the next chapter with why conrard accepted the offer or why did murata decided to offer himself, maybe let it beguing as just having sex and then, they slowly develop feelings for each other, or murata's thoughs and feelings about giving himself as a supstituted, how does he feels about having sex with a man thats sees other person when he is doing him, i don't know things like that, i'm all for the angst and drama so... its your choice, but i would realy love it if you continued this story i'm enthrall by the ideas and posibilities the pair brings and the context in which they've come to be together. ja ne!

Oh interesting. I don't think I have ever seen this pairing before.

More please. I love Murata and Conrad so I am intrigued.