rate_review Reviews

Hi sweetie,

I was so curious if you had this posted. And finally you did. I am really glad. I loved this little teaser story. It's really filled with angst and you don't know if it is reality or dream. Shudder the thought of having to be so late in expressing feelings that time passes you by and some horrific event takes place that rips the happiness from you. Isn't it so? I think you did a great job at this. I know you were nervous at first, but you see.. it's a great story. I really like it. You did a good job honey.

Hugs and snugs

yo jenny jen this story is HOT I love it you make the perfect stories
I love the way you think ^_^ Great Job on this storie

Thanx Daxemon for the review. I am glad that you liked it. *smiles*

Awwww.....you scared me there. It ended do sweet. Go RYO!!!!!!!!

Thank you FAKEmpregnator for the review I am glad that the story has everything a deathfic/angst should have BUT with a twist being that there was no death. Thats how I like them I really don't like deathfics, because they always kill off the charcter that I love in the story. Oh and when you said that you go to the end first, I also do that to see if the preson is really dead or not.

I don't like reading deathfics where Dee and/or Ryo die either, but I have a habit of peeking at the end to check if it's safe to continue on. I'm glad I did, because I love this fic. It has all the angst and grief that deathfics strive for, but has the big payoff that I believe all angst fics should have at the end. I hope to see more from you.

I am the same way, I really don't like stories when they die either so I did it like this. My idea come from a soap opera called Dallas. Thank for reviewing and I am glad that you liked it.

I don't read stories where Ryo or Dee dies. I scrolled down and saw that he was talking to Ryo and I finished your story. It wa very well written and I'm happy to know that he was having a bad dream. You did a very good job.