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What that was a sudden ending? It can't be done can it?

Write more, its the best YukiXSuichi cuteness I've read.

I am wondering if the "Ghost" was there to prevent Eiri from dying because she couldn't prevent her loved one from dying. I was getting that feeling. I mean she knew she couldn't show herself to Eiri because he seemed sooo sure that it was nothing, but Shuichi was another issue. I mean think about it, she wanted them to have a chance at being a family because she couldn't LOL...but maybe you were going in a totally differnet direction. But LOVELY as always.

this is interesting yet creepy.. i was reading this at around 4am alone in my semi dark room.. hmm.. i don't really know if its a good or bad ghost. i mean, would a good ghost make creaking sounds at night and make an apparition...? well, i was hoping that there would be more of this mystery or even provide answers to it... really, it's intriguing... ;) great job!

I liked it, I watch Ghost hunters all the time, I wonder what Grant and Jason would have to say about their apartment lol I <3 Eiri and Shu So much!

OK..that was really bizarre...kind of reminded me of Amitiville Horror...waiting for the walls to starting bleeding...laughs...catti