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May 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i hope you continue this! it was well written and the characters were in character. Asuka's curiosity would logically move to sex and maybe lesbian and 3P so that would include Rei.
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked the way the story panned out.. *smiles*
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story wasn't very imaginative, but I really like your writing style. I feel you captured the characters extremely well, maybe as well as I've ever seen. Shinji's noncommitant shrugs as a response to Asuka's statements was the best characterization I've seen in a while.
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good job. It got to the point fast enough and was in character.
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was amazingly well crafted. And in character too! More work like this, please!
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nicely written but it doesnt sound complete. i am looking forward to a continuation