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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Strange, you remind me of someone I know. You're damn near close to the authoring talents of DV85, and CrazyIvan. If you don't know who that is I pity ya bud I really do. He's been here longer then most of us have. (last time I checked possibly five years.)
Anyway, great story. 10/10 because you remind me of DV85 alone. You're work on the other hand...Also get's a 10/10 for being not only longer then mine, but having one kick ass story, and like me. You don't do sex stories very well. But the action part of your stories kicks ass. Bravo.
*BLATANT RIPOFF ALERT*
Semper Fi carry on brudda!
Anyway, great story. 10/10 because you remind me of DV85 alone. You're work on the other hand...Also get's a 10/10 for being not only longer then mine, but having one kick ass story, and like me. You don't do sex stories very well. But the action part of your stories kicks ass. Bravo.
*BLATANT RIPOFF ALERT*
Semper Fi carry on brudda!
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantasticly well done.
No spelling or gramar errors, just long enough. Utterly amazing. 10 out of 10 no doubt.
I saw growlithes an immediatly clicked (favorite pokemon and all)
I was amazed how well you wrote this. It almost felt like I was there, the atmopshere was just utterly perfect.
It has been a long time since I have read something as great as this.
Damn good job well done.
Semper phi carry the fuck on...
No spelling or gramar errors, just long enough. Utterly amazing. 10 out of 10 no doubt.
I saw growlithes an immediatly clicked (favorite pokemon and all)
I was amazed how well you wrote this. It almost felt like I was there, the atmopshere was just utterly perfect.
It has been a long time since I have read something as great as this.
Damn good job well done.
Semper phi carry the fuck on...