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for Under Watch

by YoukaiHakkai

schedule October 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must say my curiosity has been piqued but I am sad to see that this story seems to have been abandoned.
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting AU, and I'd love to see what happens next :) I love how calmly Doumeki is going along with all this XD "Oh, there's an unidentifiable rabbit-thing in my attic. Oh, it likes booze and soap operas. Well, that's alright, just so long as he remembers to turn off the tv. And now there's an angry ghost, oh well."

I was kind of sad that Doumeki didn't comment on the quality of Watanuki's cooking, though :/ Also, how long exactly has Watanuki been sealed away?

More, please!
person shourin
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very interesting so far. i would really wanna know more. please continue onegai~!
person Jamie
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love your story will there be more?
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. This story has a lot of potential. I wonder how things are gonna turn out. Is Kimihiro really dead or some how frozen since he was 19 when he 'died'. If he is really dead I'm wondering how its gonna work with Doumeki... unless you kill him too... O.O About the spirits thing... Can he talk about it after the seal is fully broken?
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story hope u can put tht next ch up soon
person Faith
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! It's been so long since I read anything in this fandom...I recently picked up where I left off in the manga. ^^; I'm glad to see a story that's actually well done. o.o I admit, this plot has never crossed my mind, so it's quite refreshing. :D The characters acting the way they do in the story is a huge bonus. ^^ I hate it when authors use artistic license to make the characters completely OOC. -.-; I'll be checking back to see more of this story! Is there any way you could contact me to let me know when you've posted another chapter? :3 Keep up the great work!

~Faith
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, at first with how polite Watanuki was being I worried but now I see that this is going to be great. I can't wait for the next update. Do we get to see Yuko again soon? And how did Watanuki die?
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how you portray Watanuki. He's adorable and Domenki very in character. The plot is intriguing. I can't wait for you to continue.
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!!!!!!

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