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nooooooo!! fix it! write more!!! its really nice finding a het dgrayman fanfiction for once and i would really like to see where this all goes. keep it up please!

OMG, that is I can say. I am enjoying this story so much~ I love it how you made Aya, an OC, into a believable DGM character - I have read many fics where the OC was nothing but a Mary Sue. But Aya - she is something and in a good way!! I hope you update soon!

I wish I would have reviewed this story when I first started reading it. (no idea when that was)

This is probably my favorite D. Gray Man story, or at least one of them. I love your character that you've brought to life. It is such a well written story, and a great/interesting plot.

I hope you continue with this, I am always looking forward to an update.

~Smo

i'm sorry for not being able to find this story sooner. seeing for so many chapters that you had no reviews made me sad. i was slightly happy when i saw you did get one reviewer. i love the story so far and am glad your muse is getting better. he shouldn't have only cookies though. as mitskune would say he should have cake. sorry it made me think of honey sempai from ouran high school host club. please update soon. here is one more reviewer for you. even if i don't review in the future know there is atleast one more person that loves this story.
windingcircle4@yahoo.com

I like to sometimes be able to read my reviews, but since I'm your only AFF reviewer, I'll stick around here!
Lavi is adorable!! (still) Overprotective, adorable and utterly glompable! But how will he treat her now that he's realized that he has to leave her sometime... I wonder if I can make time to read the story over again today?
Kanda was... showing emotion o_o and attachment... will he be Lavi's rival? *insert evil smile* Or maybe just a brother figure.
*sends a tray of cookies to muse man*

*gives muse man more cookies* They finally get to see each other again! Will Lavi smother her to the point where she can't breathe (again)? And will he ever let her out of his sight? XD Kanda is cute~ I've wanted to see such a side to him for a long time, but he rarely shows any emotions beyond anger, annoyance and boredom... Tyki's fascination for sticking his hands where they shouldn't be is slightly... weird? unnerving? interesting? *speechless* I STILL can't see how this doesn't have any other reviews!! You HAVE to have silent readers! *was one for some time before making an account so I could review...* Though you seem to have more reviewers on fanfictionDOTcom. *adds to several favorite lists*

I'd give you an elephant, but it kind of escaped when I wasn't looking... Sneaky animals...

Kanda's a nice guy~~ We don't see that too often.
I'M THE FIRST REVIEWER?? O__O There has to be some silent readers somewhere!
I'm sorry I'm such a poor reviewer, but I have problems sorting out my opinions on books and stories and similar stuff, so I only make good reviews every blue moon or so.... *gives Muse Man a cookie*

Oooo~~ I like this story!! And I even printed out the story about your make-believe muse man XD I have a habit of sticking interesting/funny quotes or similar things onto my walls~

Definately checking in again!