rate_review Reviews

oh so so good! loved it. i'm just kind of giddy and speechless now so i don't have much more to say except wonderful job! great details and i do hope you continue to write!

A little while before reading this I had the misfortune of reading a horrible translated doujinshi that centered around Maka and Tsubaki being drugged and their minds/souls broken until they were nothing more than brainless sex slaves. It got worse the further I read and my hopes that Soul or Black Star would save the girls were dashed completely by the end. In fact Soul was killed and had his soul devoured, leaving the ending with the girls being sex slaves forever. This left me very irritable for many an hour afterward and looking for something to calm me down.

In my search for a reminder that it was just someone's atrocious fan fiction that was illustrated, I looked for other fanfics. I fully expected subpar stories with drastic OOC situations or terrible grammar, spelling, and/or writing skills. But I figured even a tepid fanfic would at least ease the agitation I felt.

Your story was beyond what I expected and I thank you for it. Maka and Soul felt in character and the story, though short, was charged with a delicious sense of sexuality that was had an underscore of awkward innocence and love. I gave it 5 stars and it deserves every one. The only down side is that there isn't more to read and savor. I feel a lot better now after having read this and hope that you write more in the future.

I like! I like! Nice descriptions without making them seem out of character. I would like to see more of your Soul Eater ideas on here! What would have been bad for Maka and Soul is if Deathscythe walked in right after they finished. Of course I'm certain that Soul wouldn't object to Blair joining in with him and Maka next time.

Hot DAMN! that was a steamy fic and i LOVED it!!!!! I really do hope you write more Soul x Maka stuff i would definitely look forward to them. :) Thanks for the smex ;) Bravo on the whole thing. F**k it was awesome!

Love it
Write more MakaXsoul!!!

OMG. I've been waiting for sooo long for a fic like this! It's simply brilliant. Your ability to create the atmosphere is nothing if not enviable. Keep writing! I'm hooked!

there should be a sequel where they engage in intercourse on top of the piano.

omy goodness i always love your stories. your characterizations are awesome and on point. even if its OOC you make it so believeable. and the lemon always makes me happy =]

Cool, a Soul Eater fic. They really need a soul eater section on this site.

I know i have already reviewed your story but, I wasnt sure if you were aware of the new soul eater category up here. You should add your fic. Oh and by the way your fic seems to be better each time I read it! XD