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OMG, CONGRATULATIONS YOU HAVE WRITTEN THE FIRST SOUL EATER LEMON! I LOVED IT! I DEMAND A SEQUEL OR A CHLLANGE FIC THATS A SEQUEL TO THIS ONE! IT WOULD TAKE PLACE MAYBE A COUPLE MONTHS AFTER BREAKING POINT, SOUL WOULD BE SILENTLY JEALOUS AS HE WATCHED OTHER MALES START TO NOTICE MAKA :MAYBE A GROWTH IN HER BREAST SIZE OR SOMETHING ELSE?XD: THEN THERE WOULD BE A AWESOME SMEX SCENE WITH MAKA ASKING HIM WHAT THE HELLS WRONG, AND HIM REPLYING THAT HE CANT STAND THE WAY OTHERS LOOK AT HER :I'M SORRY, I LIKE POSSESIVENESS TO A POINT: HIM GIVING HER A MARK WHERE OTHERS CAN SEE IT OR SOMETHING? WHAT DO YOU THINK? SOMETHING TO WRITE WHEN YOUR BORED OR SOMETHING, HOPEFULLY YOU WILL CONSIDER THIS, I'M SO GLAD YOUR NOT SOME STUPID AMATUER WHO DOES NOT KNOW HOW TO WRITE. BECAUSE THATS WHAT I THOUGHT THIS WAS AT FIRST AND WAS LIKE IF THATS WHAT THIS IS IM GOING TO BE PISSED AT THIS PERSON FOR GIVING ME FALSE HOPE THAT THERE WAS ACTUALLY A WELL WRITTEN SOUL/MAKA FIC! BUT PLEASE DO CONSIDER AND HAVE A WONDERFUL TIME DOING IT! I APPLAUD YOU FOR MAKING THE FIRST SOUL EATER LEMON NAD THAT IT WASNT COMPLETE CRAP! YAY FOR WRITERS WHO KNOW WHAT THIER DOING!

It's great to see a Soul Eater fic on the site! Great job - well written and hot!