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I got a few paragraphs in and stopped. Firstly, because of spell mistakes, and I know you've spell checked, but I still see mistakes "Bag" not "Badge" Secondly, what are these pokemon? Its all well and good giving us nicknames but what are the species?

Its confusing and grammar needs looking at. It has potential.

I would actually suggest you work on your spelling. I managed to read the first half of it but the second half. I couldn't frankly read, it was random words incorrectly spelled and put into random places. Before you do post your next chapter please check your spelling. It looks like it was writen in under five minutes flat.