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for The Descent

by DangerBeta

person jen
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! The emotions are so intense - great writing! Please continue!
person InfinateXKILAR
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know you must be busy with other things but in all honestly you need to write more on this story. It is very good. though i would say that the way you played off Ryuk was quiet brilliant, but maybe he could be just a bit more possesive toward Light? anyway, please write more!
person Reso
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I absolutely love this! My only complaint is that chapter three was to short, but its not a big deal. Please update soon, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
person Rale
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the first Ryuuk/Light story I've ever read and I've gotta admit, it's great compared to what I thought the pairing would be. Your story is very unique and is definitely apart from the norm. You're very creative and it makes your story more interesting than the average read. Thanks for having the courage to write your story the way you have, it's a real eye opener and you've done it in extremely good taste. Please don't be discouraged by the lack of reviews. I do hope I get to read more of your work and that you'll update this soon. Thank you for the effort you've put in so far and take care!
person Smile
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like the story! ive Never read one involving ryuk and i was really interested in it and i hope you finish it
person Dana
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far. Very good, I'm addicted to this story now. I think Ryuk and Light are deffinantly a very underrated couple. This is the best Ryuuk X Light story I've read, please keep up the great work and I look forward to more chapters!!
person TenshiHaku
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know, I know, I should have reviewed sooner (especially since I already read the story at least twice) but I just wanted to say that I really like your fanfic. It is a pairing I haven't seen before and you really keep them quite in character considering the circumstances you put them in. Please update soon?
person naruchan
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I can't believe you have only 1 review!? Your story is amazing :D
Raito is my favorite DN character and, although i do love LxRaito, I wanted to read something different. I agree with you, the story does give the pairing a good dynamic and I'm not grossed out in the least ^^ I think the couple (in this fic, at least) is strangely sexy! XD

So please continue! I totally support :D
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story! it's really good! i have never read this pairing before and after reading this i actually really like it! please update soon! i can't wait to find out what happens next!

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