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Hmm...

Ryuichi and Eiri...

Don't know about that one.

Great story so far.

TEASE!

most ppl wouldn't like the knowledge that they resembled a past lover. i know i wouldn't. how can you trust that he is really looking at you and not seeing his past? yeah. he can say he's over his ex-lover and has moved on, but i think there would always be that lingering doubt somewhere even if you're not conscious of it. i would not feel comfortable being with someone who had a lover who resembled me.

loved it! thank you! it was very well researched. well done.

Im sorry but the first chapter portrays Shuichi as kinda shallow. The first time he see Eiri hes like omg i love him.. Just because he looks hot. At least in the manga and anime they had a conversation that LEADS to The two of them coming to gether due to Shuichbi trying to prove himself.

Awesome story! Really liked how you set the cast in years past. Well written and thoroughly enjoyable.

I like how the syory is written so far but I get the feeling of middle ages in europe no Japan.


But it's still well written. Also if you're going to use japanese I suggest you check you're translation i.e nemonogatari does not mean bedtime, it means bedtime story. Monogatari means story. what you need is time not story, which would be jikan therefore the word you're looking for is nerujikan. Neru means to sleep, lie down, rest, or bed.

But i like all the same ^_^

glad you got it re-posted! Still as awesome as before- and more. I love how it flows and everything. Very cute too. and like i told you before, i loved the ending and the smex at the end. Can't wait for your next story!