rate_review Reviews

PLease write on. I really like this. :)

I can see promise in the writer, and there are some very good building blocks here. Not my cup of anything in any case, but the ability to capture the smaller nuances in character actions can be very tricky. If there was a bit more... realism (I know, stupid to say about an anime fanfic). If there is someone forcing themselves show the urgency, resistant or hesitant? Show them at resisting or hesitating. Yes it may feel good, but they wouldn't be able to overcome their ingrained beliefs instantly when suddenly thrust into an unsure situation. But over all, I will just say it again, there is promise of even better to come in the future I believe.

Nyaaa!! You totally got me into the mood for some Ed/Roy/Ed... mmmm yeah... one of the hottest pairings EVA!!

So, yeah.. totally digging it thus far! I want to know why Roy is "suddenly" acting his feelings out to Ed and why is Ed so freaked... and I want to see some hot "action' *wink wink nudge nudge* oh btw loved the devil smiley at the end of Roy's note on the test lmao! very roy nfufufu

anywho.. love ya girl! keep it up! motto motto!!

Nic

K! nya your story ROCKS!i cant wait to see more, it is promising as hell. damn i say.
there is something so HOT about Roy calling Ed sensei... mmmmm...i love Ed, and i think you have a great thing going here, cant wait to see more. and i am glad that i got to be your first review, but people need to get on the ball, cause.. yum
-sk