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I began to read this awhile ago, and I`m glad I came back to read more! It is a wonderful story, and beautifully written. The character`s are keep in context and everything is flowing nicely. I hope you update this again very soon.

great detail. loving the story so far. i was wondering what was wrong with Light. do i detect that he's being a vamp?

wtf? when did Light turn into an vampire? I'm confused... :-\

I don't think L is dead... Light just paniced, he's such a mess, hehe. You describe this so well this is really intresting. It's hard to find a really intresting fic that you get sucked into, but you just captured me :) I want more of this fic since this is so great. Please update soon :)

Whats up with L? He seems almost mean? You are capturing the reader really well and I just want to find out what's happening :)This fic seems really good, keep it up :)

Update soon please I'm enjoying this greatly.

Chapter 2
You have GOT to update this soon!!! What's happening to Light! Does L know? Is L part of it? What's going on!?

Holy crap please update X_X And I promise I'll give a better review, haha.

Very great start! I can't wait to read more!

Wow.

This story is excellent, I love the details you've used and the plot has me extremely interested. I think I have a vague idea of where this is heading and if so, I really really look forward to it.

It's pretty shocking to read how L let him go on his own. A first in a DN fanfic, usually it's L that reluctantly comes along so he could monitor his suspect. Not that your take isn't a good thing, it's very refreshing in fact. I think you have both of their personalities down. Especially how cold L acts towards Light, though not to the point where he's cruel with him he did let Light catch up on some sleep and leave after all even if it was for the sake of the investigation. Why else would L do that right? XD

Please update soon and thank you so much for a great read =)