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Great story needs maybe the dad ?

wow, only 7 reviews for this??? it was amazing and sweet and hot...all in one!!! you must continue this! ^^

There's something about incest sometimes that makes one hot and bothered.

Not with one's own family of course though.

Please update.

I'll be waiting.

Its even more well witten then I can remember, most likely due to grammer/spell checks, anyway; Your presence was sorely missed, and ive literrally been kicking myself for a year now for not saving a word doc-copy after youve been banished ^_^ *Copy's Pastes Saves*. If I recall correcly, where the next chapter ended would be the siblings have a moment in the kitchen, yes? Questions arise! In Regards to Sakura: What will be done with Yukito/Yue? Clow Reed forseen/intended him falling for Sakura, which obviously did not happen in Canon (proving the future is state of flux). And what about Tomoyo? Is she still forever sidestepped, or recent revelation of brotherly love opened Sakura's eyes to that Love, in all its varieties/complexities, goes a little farther then she initially thought? And poor Syaoran? Can he contend with and maintain diminance of the canon's #1 couple, or will (very happy) Meiling have a chance to keep him for herself? ^_^ I asked these because a year ago you mentioned about creating multiple story-arcs relating to other with varied characters, all of which were sorely lacking here a year ago!

This is among the better fiction archived thats both romantic AND erotic thats manages to remain -faithful- to CCS canon along with its -hanyaan- ambiance (to borrow Sakura's cute expression), and pays tribute the spirit of Clamp's artistic visions. I just wish folks here focused on stories like these instead of smut/porn; half of which you can switchout the characters names/appearance and one would never tell its a CCS fiction, a fact due to being so out of character/canon. (Thank you Capitalist for showing how Adult Fanfiction done right!) So on behalf of all the intelligent and loyal fans (regardless of Allegience to favored character/couple) thank you for contributing your vision to the fandom.

I can think of no other anime/manga with a diverse and ameiable cast, mixed with rich universally appleaing storytelling with innocenct innuendos, and cleverly depicting a world idealistic and tolerant then ours (I doubt theres any crime in Tomeada). Its easy to imagine Sakura growing up in ways not depicted when the shows cameras are off (as depicted in Tomoyo's Video Diaries ^_^); she may be bit dense naive/ditzy, but when insighful or determined, her nature lends istelf to big heart with alot of room for love and happiness with the people around her.

nice lemon

Yay, I made you happy :) Reviews always make me happy and it's nice to be able to do it for someone else as well.

Now, this chapter. I've already read it of course, but seeing as it was so long ago that I did so, I read it all again. And, naturally, I'm glad I did because it's such a yummy chapter XD And so much fluff, gotta love the fluff.

I can't wait for chapter four! *sits down and commences intense waiting*

Now that's an interesting way of looking at things.

booya that beautiful baby.

You have returned! Oh, the happiness :) I read this the first time around and was so disappointed when it was taken down. But now it (and you) is back and I can't wait to see how things turn out (fingers crossed we get past chapter 4 this time XD).

On the whole, very nicely written. No typos that I could see and you have a style that's clear and easy to understand :)