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hmm id like this to contune because it is the best story ive seen so far, as for name umm The Unexpected? -titles head-

It would be really interesting to see these two have a child. LOL a pregnant Vash would be hilarious!! Any way, a really intereting concept and very well written. You may want to have someone scan for grammat and spelling errors though.

AHHHHH!!! UPDATE IT UPDATE LIKE MAD KEEP UPDATING TILL YOU CAN'T UPDATE ANYMORE!! And since the other title didn't sit right and you've decided on M-Preg how about Expecting? Or even A Different Kind Of Love.

PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! Af is giggling and snorting over her idea for a story title "Seeds of love" but considering the meds she's taking for her migraines it's not supprising of course "Joyful Harvest" isn't much better sorry... we're a bit tapped out sorry. but PLEASE don't be discouraged... when in doubt go to the source and re-watch the anime or something... i think animefever has it on their site if you don't have it.

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Rysha

I am giving a name to your fiction because it needs a name besides untitled. I name it Nothing's Tighter Than a Virgin. It works and it's a standout line in the story. but thank you for writing this I rp this storyline all the time with my rp buddy and you've captured it quite nicely. I think you should make this more than a one-shot and keep it going maybe even have Vash get pregnant there's just not enough M-PREGS out there for this series and it would make fans of it happy. Keep it up you've got somehting good and origional and rare for this series. Thank you and if you keep writing I'll keep reviewing. ^_^.

-L

a fellow sufferer of the bunnies?? we threaten to bbq the little scamps but they still get thru... Af's found having several notebooks (pen and paper) and writing notes helps that way she can get them down and settled then return to the rest of the story she's trying to write. We love the story and hope to read more of your work.

Rysh and a suffering Affie