rate_review Reviews

Hum… Do I detect some circular logic here? Post 3-I the three kids come back, find their Eva’s, and then go through instrumentality all over again? I guess I’ll just have to read the last chapter to find out.

Still well done, if not a little confusing.

Lord Saturn

This turned out to be quite different and enjoyable. Actually you should post it on Fan Fiction. People here are trolling for lemons and this could easily be rated K+ or T. I love the WAFF but there is very little mature content.

Very well done and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Lord Saturn

I like your reference to incest in having Asuka and Shinji ‘repopulate’ the earth, the gene pool would be too small to be viable. Most people forget that and those people that cling to the Adam & Eave thing forget that the human race would be based on incest if that were true.

This is a good first chapter, I like the build up. I just hope that there is a lemon down the road.

Lord Saturn

Another good chapter; Asuka’s mother’s maternal instincts being sucked into Unit 02 was a good idea. I think that you are still building up to something big.

Lord Saturn

Interesting. I liked the scene with Asuka and Rei with the futons. But you are not elaborating much. I do find plausible explanations now and then to keep me reading.

Lord Saturn

So far, so good. This is shaping up to be a good story. I look forward to it.
Read ya Later.