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damn this was a hot chapter. i loved how you got Caroline into the slave thing with May. i needed this. can't wait to see part II.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness

I would go in depth in reviewing each and every chapter I may have missed up until this point, but, frankly, they're all so good, I can really only think of one thing to say for all of them except for the most current.

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn, son. Seriously. Beautiful.

As for the most current? Well...as you could probably tell from previous posts, this really hit home with my key interest, so, I really have to give props to you. If Mary's break coincides with one of your's, then I say rest, brave champion. You've earned it. At least this story's earned it.

Love, the director,
Yoshimo Sullivan

wow, i can't believe i missed those last two chapters before seeing this one. so here's a three-part review.
-For the Calista and Eve chapter- super cute and i loved how you worked in the time travel thing
-For Kidd Summers and Karen- Awesome couple and i really enjoyed the different potions you had them use. especially the loli one, that may just give me a few ideas.
-For Bridgette and Lanette- Short but enjoyable, they make a cute incest pairing.

all together, loved the new chapters and now i'm hoping to finish my next pokemon chapter as well. Can't wait to see what's up next.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness

I'm impressed by your output lately. It's pretty quality stuff, and seeing it on the front page ever second or third day is great. Keep it up, man.

wow that was a cute chapter. it's sort of inspring me to do that request you made for my pokemon story involving the kimono girls. i think i'll make it the next chapter after the one i'm planning on doing this time.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness

Been a while since I read this last and you've been hard at work! Candice's chapter was great, what a sexual dynamo! The part with Delia was my favorite of course. Johanna's chapter of firsts was totally great, too, gotta love those milfs! I love the idea of Gardenia becoming a nudist when Rosie won't ever take her clothes off, it's kind of funny! Lyra's fun to read, I wouldn't have thought that I'd be into a fetish of so much cum but she's so cute and you make it so sexy that I was totally into it in both chapters (especailly number two, since it had Cynthia!!) But My favorite chapter since last time I reviewed is completely Jasmine's. OMG, that was SO AMAZING!!! She's like the cutest sexiest and best dominatrix I've ever heard of, everything was totally sexy, and it was so sweet at times, too! I just can't even describe how much I liked that chapter. Keep up the good work I'll be back sometime soon!

Yay! I always wanted to see Angela get payback on Aya for the bondage she was put through! I gotta admit, this shoots right to my top 10 favorite chapters in all this; this was sexy and such a delight. These two have potential in them for future scenes (heck, you could have Janice get the best of both of them, or have them both get her, or any combination of two-on-one), and I look forward to more of your work in this and other fics.

Love, the director,
Yoshimo Sullivan

wow that was hot. Lots of fun to read too. can't wait to see what you have planned next.
Descendant of the shadows
-twisteddarkness

i would like to see if cheryl and or her gardevoir will make an appearance on DJ mary or if you would eventually add onto garderotica because that could be just as or even more epic then after hours

this is a reply to the review you gave on Crossing the Line Pt II. I'm glad you liked my anti-aphrodisiac idea, and I wouldn't mind at all if you used it. also, i'd like to make a pairing request. since you have Jasmine finding more girls to be her slaves, i thought about her apprentice Janina. maybe she could be Jasmine's next slave, with her approaching Jasmine about it.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness