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wow that chapter was hot. the cum filled tub, Cynthia drinking Lyra's cum like a water fountain and the last bit about all of lyra's cum being a powerful aphrodisiac and Cynthia soaking in it for hours. words cannot describe how much i enjoyed it
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness

awesome chapter, i absolutely loved how you had all of Cynthia's lovers get together for an orgy. i also love the Phoebe and Anabel pairings. i think that the both of them are incredibly cute and putting them together makes them even cuter!
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness

that was an unbelievably great chapter. i'm really getting into Jasmine as a mistress. it's easily become a favorite of mine. i can't wait to see which girl(s) she has join her next. i also can't wait to see what you do in the next chapter.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness

... ... ...Well, I do think that my loi--yeah, my loins just exploded.

And goddamnit, that was after Jasmine bound and gagged May with their underwear! I wasn't even a fifth of the way in! I mean...WOW! That was a LONG chapter. You coulda split it into two parts, but, WOW! A marathon of sexy bondage! I...I don't know what to say, but, I think I love you forever now! (Also, don't care what Jasmine said, Clair was not missing out choosing the vibrating maiden because daaaaaaamn!)

So, uh, yeah. Great chapter. Almost intimidatingly big chapter, but great chapter. Feel...feel free to take a break from it for a while. Think the poor girl needs time to recover from all the raw sexiness that just got added.

Love, the director,
Yoshimo Sullivan

As always,an excellent chapter. I have an idea; I think you should do a double guest show,with Cynthia and Lucy. Oh and have you seen the sprites for Heart Gold/Soul Silver? Sabrina is smoking hot.

I am so glad I'm not the only one who thinks Lyra is so goddamn adorable I just wanna take her home with me! Although DAMN she can be messy when she's in the mood. Very nice chapter all around, hope to see more with Lyra (and Dawn), especially considering the whisper whisper at the end there. Looking forward to the next addition to this and any other work of your's.

Love, the director
Yoshimo Sullivan

Once again you've done an excellent job. i'm really into girl's who squirt and i must admit that this chapter was a pleasant surprise. i can't wait to see more.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness

It's always a major delight to see Rosie and Gardenia, and this chapter was probably their best yet. Not quite sure exactly what was so "new" about the last act they did before they went inside, unless they just never did tribadism between themselves, before. Good story, looking forward to more later.

very interesting chapter. i just might consider doing a nudist theme as well in one of my future stories.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness

awesome new chapter. i really loved the part with Dawn peeping on her mother. so cute! can't wait to see what's next.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness