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Four Times The Fun - Oh my god, Candice got lucky in an instant. I mean good lord, 3 straight days, that's not a marathon that's a thing of legend. And incredibly, incredibly hot. The chapter kinda lost steam around the last segment with Jenny, I found, but in all, like the "big ones" that came before, excellent work.

Hot For Teacher - And like the chapter that came after your last big one, short, sweet, and incredibly sexy in spite of its small length. Bit of a stretch in the depiction of how she managed to pin her down with one thong (maybe I'm just thinking about it wrong), but it kinda stopped mattering once she was hand bound and gagged. Great chapter.

Looking forward to more in this and other works of your's.
Love, the director
Yoshimo Sullivan

Your stories are simply great! They are always so creative and surprising.
I'd also have a shy request: Could you do something with Hunter J, please? Doesn't matter with whom. She is my absolute favorite character in addition to Musashi/Jessie, but since you've done her already I'd really love to see something with J too!

DP151 = :(

-WinterCold-

damn, that chapter was insane. beyond insane. i loved it. absolutely amazing work, you are truly a great writer.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness

very, very nice. loved the pairing. can't wait to see what you're doing next.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness

And here I thought you broke the bank with the Cynthia/Lucy+Erika/Sabrina chapter. With all the effort and power behind that one, enough to utterly floor DJ Mary (a reaction sure to have been experienced by some of the readers), I thought the story was pretty much done, like nothing could follow that act.

Well, the next chapter was still a delight. It's no followup act, but it is INCREDIBLY enjoyable on its own right (granted, this might be because I was hoping and praying that at some point we'd get to see Lara Laramie). Please continue to bring us delights, you long runner of a Pokemon yuri fic.

Love, the Director,
Yoshimo Sullivan

Guess who's back!! i just caught up on all the chapters since I last came here, you've been a busy beaver, haven't you! A busy beaver writing about a different kind of busy beavers XD

Now then, I liked almost all of the chapters (i wasn't a big fan of the apple one but that's just me). The one with Brock was funny and unexpected!

The one with Zoey and Johanna and Candice was great, I hope we see more Candice because she doesn't get nearly as much attention as she should when she's so hot and has such a sexy fire to her!

It was great to see Jasmine and Clair again, they're so cute and hot and adding May was great. I don't know if you take votes from us in the peantu gallery but if you do I say have May choose to become a slave to Jasmine in a future chapter, in fact I vote that Jasmine gets to start her own little harem of sex slaves! And her shoe thing was so awesome, did you make that up??

The Milf-tastic chapter...what is there to say but wow! what more could anyone want?

And the latest chapter with Sabrina and Cynthia and Lucy and Erika...WOW, you've outdone most everything you've written before! I love it when you have Sabrina using her powers in your stories, and this was good even for that! Oh and I don't know if I get that heel thing of Sabrina's, but I am STOKED about Cynthia getting more sensitive feet now and them cumming is weird...but in a really sexy way! Your ideas are really cool sometimes! Anyway that's all for now, keep it up cuz U R FABULOUS! <3

lolz, loved the end of that chapter. Unbelievably good work. i loved your Erika/Sabrina pairing when it first came out and how you used it in Motoko's Quest. it was a real pleasure getting to see it yet again and i loved the entire thing. can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store.

I really hate to ask, but is there any hope of seeing an update for Golden Week anytime soon? It seems like this is the only focus lately and I'm just sort of hoping... ^^

wow, that was awesome. first rate work. Got another small request that i thought up while reading this. Any possibility that you'd do another Greta chapter, only with Maylene on the recieving end of the strap-on? maybe some anal too. I think that would make for a great chapter.
Descendant of the Shadows
-Twisteddarkness

You know, Greta being a sexual dynamo or no, Cynthia is still the (lesbian) sex goddess of this and every Pokemon universe. Seriously, though, this was a wonderful chapter. Makes sense that girls who've trained near their whole lives in martial arts would have the stamina to go 'bout ten rounds straight. Very nice strap on scene at the end, if the toy itself is a bit...out of the ordinary.

As far as recommendations/requests go, I fully endorse TwistedDarkness's idea of a Dawn on Ursula chapter. It'd be nice to throw Dawn the bone on this one, given how in this universe she lost her best friend to her own mother, that's gotta be a blow to her ordinarily fragile self este--oh. Now I've made myself sad.

Anyway, keep up the great work.

Love, the Director,
Yoshimo Sullivan