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by Bishonen

schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that chapter truly lived up to it's title about being M.I.L.F.tastic. won't be able to get those images out of my head for a while, not that i'm complaining or anything. on a scale of 1 to 10 i give this a 100. can't wait to see what's up next.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Two sexy ninja babes, one dominating the other bound and gagged? It must be my birthday! Seriously, seeing chapters like these in this story, or any of your others, is like a beautiful and delicious treat.

I know it'll never happen, but all I can think about is Angela's eventual payback on Aya. Keep up the fine work.

Love, the Director,
Yoshimo Sullivan
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very nice chapter. love the pairing and what Aya did to Angela. Anyway i thought up a few ideas i'd like to see, but i'll just give you one at a time. for this one i was wondering if you'd do Ursula with Dawn. Maybe have it so Ursula ends up wrapped around Dawn's finger.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Caroline and Cynthia...hot damn, I think I was knocked out by the collective hotness the two emanated, especially in the new outfits. In fact, I think the absolutely sexiest part of this chapter was simply picturing them in those fancy dress outfits. Fine build up, nice payoff, I think I now have a hard choice in determining best couple involving Cynthia in this fic. Looking forward to more in the future.

Love, the Director,
Yoshimo Sullivan
schedule February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This latest chapter was a delight. I always have a problem picturing Jasmine as the dominant one, especially over a woman like Clair, but here, I can roll with it. It's also very good imagery in this sexy romp. A real highlight in recent chapters, and I hope you keep up the fine work.
schedule February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very, very nice. I always loved Caroline. and pairing her with Cynthia was a nice treat. can't wait to see more.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome. i loved the Clair and Jasmine pairing you made and was pleasantly surprised to see it again with May mixed into it. can't wait to see what's next.

Also, for my story 'Darling Koyomi' i'm considering doing more chapters, but i want to work on the requests i've gotten for my other stories first. that and i have a couple other stories i'm working on. But i'm definitely thinking of it.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness
person chm01
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
could you bring Francesca adn Duplica again?
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Apple fetish, apple dildos and a unique, not to mention unbelievably cute couple i can't believe i never thought of. i can't even think of a way to describe how much i loved this chapter. i seriously hope you do a little honey moon chapter with them, maybe mix it by having DJ Mary and Whitney there as well?
Descendant of the Shadows
-Twisteddarkness
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was an interesting chapter. Really made me think. Now i might have a little trouble deciding what pairing to do for the next chapter of my story lol. Kudos to DJ lucky duck fuck for the chapter and if i may make a reqeust, i was highly intrigued by the idea of Candice sleeping with Delia. i'd love to see something like that.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness

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