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I love your story and the characters are really detailed and in depth. I really hope you haven't abandoned this story, it is one of the best I've read on here

I love your story and the characters are really detailed and in depth. I really hope you haven't abandoned this story, it is one of the best I've read on here

Such an excellent story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Well written and intricately woven together. It is too bad you seem to have abandoned the story. However, I hope that you will return and continue this story.






adaequatio rei et intellectus

i enjoy the story and love your descriptive writing your spelling could use a bit of work but the story is still very we'll written aside from some normal bumps along the way..now as a incentive for you to continue writing this story i give you a obliging death threat.....finish this masterpiece or ill kill you :)

Not sure if reviewing is going to do anything, but I hope you continue this story. It's the only good Human/Lucario(well riolu, as of now) story, and you haven't even gotten to the good parts yet :p. Hurry up and update!

Nice story, i love it. First one I seen with a blaziken in it like this so that makes this story one of my tops. Other than the story "Sinners" by FlashFirestorm, I can't really find any good pokemon/human storys at all. Hope you add more blaziken/lota interactions, since I'm only read up to chapter 5 and I'm reviewing the wrong chapter, anyways hope you bring out new chapters soon, good luck. =3

I have just finished reading your story (the 8 chapters in a row) and all I have to say is that I really like your story. The characters are very well developed (at least in my opinion) and it has an interesting plot. I'm looking forward to updates. Keep up the good work =D

PD:Please, forgive me if I make some mistakes; English is not my native language.

grumble, grumble, grumble. VODKA!!!!

passed out drunk.

doctor t

*stummbles into picture with a 5th of jack in one hand and a handle of whiskey in the other* shuffle shuffle shuffle
*takes a swig of one bottle and looks at the post board* bbbbbuuuuurrrrrpppppppp!!!!!!!!
man xain, we need him alive*huck* an if you threten him he ll probably leave again *shakes his head at the wall*
god Iota, the least you could do is give a twitch of live at least every couple of weeks. just that would ease the frustraion of impatience*huck* or at least keep people around.
*starts stumbbling away and muttering*

drinking so much fire wate.......fuck this, my head hurts
you know the drill
feel-good-ologist
Doctor Thoth

ice pack and four asprin please