rate_review Reviews

Cerebrate Fate -- I'm not dead quite yet! Chapter Six is out!

ragdoll -- The wait sucked, I know, but its out now :P.

Espy -- Heh, "soon" was supposed to be about a month ago... It's all explained in the Author's Notes of Chapter Six.

dave -- Thanks for reading dave, I'm glad you like it.

markman -- Heh, thanks for your compliments, I've tried to make the story feel as 'real' as it can get, and I actually have already posted this on FanFiction.net, my Penname is "Noah Ariston" over there though.

David Davidson -- Go for it.

Shade -- Oh its been entirely writers block, Lol. I couldn't care less about AGNPH, really, it's trolls trolling trolls 24/7. Even if no one read my story I'd keep writing it, there isn't anything that will or can stop me from finishing the story.

Anon -- I'd never stop writing my story because of critique...Ironically from people whom have never read it...but anyways, Chapter Six is out and Chapter Seven will be coming (I hope) this month.

a piss off reader -- Errr, lets not do that... I'm not dead, I'm still writing heh, no one needs to invoke the wrath of SPARTA on anyone. I never get angry at anything, epically something as trivial as people angrily typing on forums. So, lets not get angry at anyone or troll anything, and just enjoy Chapter Six :D.

a wandering stranger -- You've hit the nail on the head. I'm actually really glad you were perceptive enough to know that I wouldn't get derailed by something like criticism, and that you know I wouldn't decide to end the story. I enjoy getting critiqued, it helps me become better. The entire delay is explained in the Author's Notes of Chapter Six (which is out, woo!). I hope you enjoy Chapter Six.

doctor thoth -- I see it like this: I find that If I read other stories, it dampens my creativity, because I'll see an element in the story that I've wanted to use in the future, such as a character trait, or a certain twist, and then when I sit down to write, I'll have to not use that element because I've already seen it done. I just enjoy writing the ideas that come to me, but of course, if a story is exceptional, I'll read it just for fun :P.

Ragdoll -- Heh, I agree. Though, he IMd me at one point, and I eventually had him apologizing after I got one of the site admins (who enjoyed my story) to tell him to shut the fuck up. So, everything worked out :P. It never discouraged me though, I've just hit some...'speed-bumps' .

Jinko -- The internet sure is scary, but I've managed to survive!

Sam -- I'm glad you like it so much! I'm defiantly going to continue it until the end...which will eventually make it a long, long story..But anyway, Chapter Six is out, and I hope you enjoy :D.

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If you don't feel like reading every response to every review, here's the important stuff:

• I'm alive
• Chapter Six is out
• The delay is explained in the Author's Notes of Chapter Six.
• I could care less about AGNPH
• A site admin told the forum moderator to shut the fuck up
• I love criticzm in all forms, educated and ignorant (one is helpful, the other is funny) and it never discourages me
• I'm going to finish this story no matter what
• And uh, yeah, that's it, go read!

Holy canole! This story certainly was a good read so far, I do hope very much that you continue it! I mean, I'm not usually one for fanfiction, but dang, this is certainly a gem of one, so that says something for me.

To dash down any false hope, That "was" my "review" and yes, I obviously didn't read the reviews first. Jinko apologizes, I removed my own and replaced it.

Well the story seems great... but Iota seems to have gone missing for a month now. I fear for the worst. You never can tell over the internet.

Urh.. I swear there was a complimentary review in place of yours, just this morning. It should be between yours and mine, but it isn't - it was left as if the reviewer hadn't read the review page.

Can only authors and mods delete reviews, or can users delete their own? Because if it's the former, Iota must still be lurking.

I don't see how you can say he's working with their criticism, because they didn't actually /post/ any criticism. An overzealous moderator waved his admin tools around and locked the topic.

While I hope this brand of faggotry hasn't discouraged Iota, I have to say that this long with zero progress looks pretty bleak.

what the fuck is this shit. are we just going to sit here and let a great story fall and crumble because some "children" super techno nerds are going to pick and poke the author to death like psyco english teachers. i move that those of us here who want this story to continue create accounts on that forum and start fighting back. ARE WE JUST GOING TO LET IOTA DIE!!!!!!! i say no. i say no and will throw shit at those nerds. members of AFF assemble. we will trimph for this is SPARTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! charge your keyboads!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

link to the forum below. death to the super nerds
http://agnph.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=5345&highlight=lucario

the forum topic is locked. :( disgruntled because i just tried to post :( so either e-mail iota directly or start a new thread on the site. operation HELP IOTA is a go.

calm your self reader. iota thrives on criticism. i doubt he will faulter if some as you say "children" don't like his story as much as we at AFF do. this happens in many forums so it is not something to get so up in arms about. it is iota's decision to continue not theirs. if anything he is taking a while to rework his ideas using their criticism to make the story even better. all we can really do sit back and hope he will continue.

If you look at the fourm it talks a-lot about new lucario storys recently. maybe he is reading them to find ways to make his story more uniqe. would be a good idea.


man i shouldn't have drunk that 5th of whisky. think im gonna be sick