rate_review Reviews

Must I commence the death threats? *Angry Zerg chittering*

Hey, just read your story, not gonna lie, really great! I can totally relate with shade, I also feel like a crack addict. So please, I NEED MY FIX!

Oh no!!! Iota has been missing for 8 days!! Maybe someone kidnapped him =(

Aa~aa~ah. It feels like I've been waiting an eternity for chapter six. Writer's block? Beta reader missing? Hope you update soon.

This is really a shame
It is a great story
Too bad we're never going to see the rest of it

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or if ur 2 lazy to copy taht link, MOAR!!11!!!!eleven!!!1112!!!!oneoneoneonetwo!!!!!!!!eleventyone!!!!

That marks 4008 hits Iota. Congrats!

you have quite the good story here. so far it is better in plot, character development, and grammar that a lot of other stories out there. very original story and

characters. the great chemistry between the characters is a very nice touch. impressive on the amount of detail you have going into the story. the chapters being long is

a plus. the fact that it is the pokemon in battle making it's own decisions and battle plans as opposed to being told by the trainer ever thing to do is also a nice touch.

a very good story that I will highly recommend to any and everyone. I will be very interested to see how the story continue.

I give it a 10.5 out of 10

keep up the good work.

eagerly awaiting the next chapter,

your friend,

a wandering stranger

it would appear that the review system hates my spacing. sorry for my review getting a little jumbled, but hopefully it will still be legible to most people. also I have reviewed the activity of this "war zone" as it would appear between the loyal fans and the impatient few. seems like there will be a story in the backdrop of the story so to speak.


once again waiting eagerly albeit patiently,
with tea in hand,
a wandering stranger

"Well. I hope you're happy. You are OFFICIALLY late." Says Fate.