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hmm? oh hello Iota, nice of you to drop by. I was just beginning to muse over where you had gone. In any case, I'll go make some more tea. hopefully it will be ready by the time you finish writing so we shall be prepared for the unveiling.

getting up to put on a new pot of tea

a wandering stranger

8 Months...I'm gonna fucking stab the fuck outta you Iota. >_>;

Oh snap~

I just had a random twine of inspiration. Gonna start writing this story again =].

Probably not going to have the insane length to these chapters that I once did, I'm going to start getting to the "point" of the story now.

Keep on the lookout for the next chapter!

day 1 week 5 andso many people are going CRAZY FOR THIS STORY!!!!
sorry had to do that.
so WHEN IS CHAPTER 9 COMING OUT *crys*

It took a few days, but I read through all 8 of your chapters you have up. I'm amazed at the cold dark feeling, of no emotion whenever you describe the White-washed facility with the emotionless doctors. (shudders), I've still got chills down my spine from reading them and I even enhanced the feeling by having some cold, yet soothing music in the background. I did listen to the music you suggested to get a better feel from Dr. Michael's office, but it's play time ran out before I could finish it all so I found other forms of music to fill in the time slot.

I'm also finding it hilarious to see how powerful and logical Subject_14 (Iota) is, yet he's like a little kid not totally understanding the strange emotions he experiences and then debates with himself as to what could possibly be the cause of these sudden feelings. With Blazikein as an intercepting variable, things can only get all the more interesting for Iota (Subject_14)...

As for Noah Ariston, and his Riolu, I can see the relationship slowly developing for the two. It causes me to crave more as to how strong their relationship will grow.

Furthermore, the "how these things" are going to be tied together in the end, will be an interesting combination of logic and drama, or at least if my predictions of your plans for this story to take shape are accurate.

I only have a minor nitpick: Be sure to take a moment to read through what you have typed/written and make sure when you read through it, that there aren't any small "stumbles" of minor grammar errors. The story is well-crafted, so I can easily distinguish what you actually meant to say, but it does become all the more distracting for my enjoyment. Please continue progressing through this story and I promise to continue giving you my truly honest thoughts and constructive criticisms.

~silentwriter~

hello it's been 3 weeks since i read your story and it is the best story i have ever read (i dont read books alot) i was hoping you can get chapter 9 done and it is at a supence moment so im ichin to read chapter 9, i herd you dont think any budddy reads this but i do so thanks.

hmmmmmm mabye i should have read what you guys were saying in the review first i thout hardly anybody read this good story (i know i made spelling mistaks i hate spell so much I CANT SPELL FOR FLEAS!!!)

PLZZZZZ TELL ME YOUR WRITING MORE i want to know what happens to Blaziken and Iota
its a very GOOD story

Perhaps a ritual to revive the dead is in order, or may be we should just find Iota and inject him with the zombie flu.

Screaming about Richard Nixon from on top of a keg by now
feel-good-ologist
Doctor T

Seems like it was more of a spasm than a revival.

Iota, you tease us.