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I did? GOD DAMMIT! And its ceRebrate fate, not ceLebrate Fate. You can just call me Fate. Matter of fact, Thats what I'm going to refer to myself on here as from now on.

ssbn732 - :O Thank you for your review. I'm working practically nonstop on the new chapters. I'm actually not entirely sure where the story is going until I sit down and actually type it, but I have a basic Idea of the main events I want to happen. Anyway, enjoy your Tea, Moar will be delivered soon.

Cerebrate Fate - Sinners kicks ass, too.

@Iota: Glad you and everyone else in the pokemon section agrees. Also, hope your headache gets better, for 2 reasons. One: I would hate to have the next chapters delayed, and Two: I dont want you to die from a uber god headache of +5 killage.

Anon - Haha, thanks. It feels like there's a midget in my head trying to burst it's way out, but I'm working on the chapter. This next one is important :o.

Responding to the above review:

Blaziken is indeed an awesome pokemon. However, I do not see Blazikens, or any pokemon for that matter, in a romantic light. But I digress. You were right not to cut Blaziken, as Blazikens are awesome pokemons.

I must say this is the bet thing I have read in a long while, I enjoy the good writing, lack of typos that most fanfics I've read seemed to be plauiged with, and great use of charecters. All I can realy do is scream "MOAR", keep up this great work.

/me gets a cup of tea and waits patiantly
PS: My spelling is a bit subpar.

@SSBN O rly? Best you have read in a while eh? Check out Sinners, arcs 1 and 2 if you havent already. All available from this authors page:

Linky Linky:

http://anime.adultfanfiction.net/authors.php?no=1296803608

Just finished chap. 4. Must say, I like it so far. The only crappy thing are the damn yaoifix ads at the top of the page, and the occasional spelling mistake. I have no experiance with the Sinnoh pokemanz, however, I noticed that the new pokemon, the one from the egg, (Not good with names that i dont know) has an ability similar to Psymakio. Namely, the ability to read emotions. And the Blaziken x Human/??? relationship? I thought you said that it would not be similar to Sinners in any way shape or form?

Heh, I knew I'd get a review like that eventually, but it's all good, I get to answer some questions a lot of readers might be wondering.

Here's what I think you're misunderstanding:

The connection between Slash and Psymakio has developed so strongly due to their bonding, and allowing each other to see deeper and deeper into each other...I haven't really watched much of the Pokemon show, but I assume that a Gardevoir's bond with his/her trainer is an invention of Slash's. The bond is strong because they allow it to be.

Lucario's, however, don't need to be bonded to shit, and they don't feel anything. Their innate ability is to simply -see- Aura. They can't reach into your mind and pluck out the times when you were happy/sad/angry or anything, it's not Psychic.

I didn't create that ideal of a Riolu/Lucairio, that's been given to them by the Creators of Pokemon. If you have watched the movie "Lucario and the Mystery of Mew" I think it'll explain it better. The communicating into a persons mind wasn't even my unique trait to a Riolu/Lucario, it's also a characteristic of their Pokemon.


I didn't want some crazed Pokefan in here yelling "OMGWTFBBQ U DnD INKLUD RIOLUZ ABILITty to ReeeD AURA Wtf?!".

Make sure you know, there isn't a 'bond' between Riolu and Ariston. She can read the Aura of any living thing, and comminucate with it, thats just what Riolus/Lucarios do.

As for the Blaziken?

The Blaziken has always been one of my favorites of Pokemon, and just because in Sinners Chapter 21 there was a Blaziken introduced, I'm not going to cut her out of my story. The only thing the Blaziken in his story and the Blaziken in my story have in common is that they're the same pokemon.

Trust me, the relationship between Iota/Blaziken in the last chapter is misleading.

Protip: If you're not familiar with the pokemon I mention, just type their names in google image search to get an Idea of what I'm describing.

That about covers everything, if you have anymore questions let me know.

In all my years of reading random things I've found on the internet, Project Crucifix has got to be the best. The detail, the story, and your ability to keep us interested is simply amazing. The only few things that I'd have to tell you is that it's "stare" not "start" and there were a few other spelling errors, but it was hardly noticable.

My score for Project Crucifix would have to be:

Spelling: 85/100
Grammar: 95/100
Character Development: 100/100
Reader Interest: 100/100
Use of Lit. Effects 95/100

Overall: 95/100