rate_review Reviews

YEAH! WE HAVE A RESPONCE! Mexico huh? Must be nice to get out of the U.S. I
wish I could:( Oh well.... Say when you get back post some of that Mexico scenery for us to look at:) You know like post a post card or somethingXD(Post a postcard, I
crack my self up!)

Iota, C'mon.
It's not that you didn't get the new chapter out by Christmas, that I knew would happen, but at least keep us updated. I know you probably have a lot more things that take priority over updating a fanfiction, but you should at least check in every now and then, it lets us know that you're alive! It also, at least for me, keeps the interest and anticipation of the next chapter more alive, rather than going a few weeks to a few months without hearing from you.

..........Iota?
................Are you there?
....OK, This is a little depresing.
...OK IOTA....ARE YOU THERE? GIVE US A SIGN OF LIFE BUDDY... LIKE A RESPONSE TO POSTINGS....OOO OR BETTER YET A NEW CHAPTER :) PLEASE? COME ON I BARELY HAVE A LIFE AS IT IS.

You're a tad late... but its not like it wasn't expected... <_< and that's a bad thing by the way.

Well, that was a nice chapter...Albeit a little long, where as it's not NEAR as long as my updates. XD


But Iota...Violence IS my fuckin specialty. O_o

chapters seven was very well done as always and I agree with Edward that the chapter served it's purpose well. however, as frustrating as cliffhangers are, it was better having a (end of the day the world is open to tomorrow) kind of cliffhanger instead of a (middle of battle will they live or will they die) cliffhanger. couple of errors but that is to be expected of any writer; that is why publishers require authors to have their work read and edited by one or more people. good luck trying to stick to a deadline Iota, I Know you can do it. Happy Holidays to you Iota and to all my fellow readers/reviewers.

setting another pot of tea on to brew
eagerly albeit patiently awaiting the next chapter
a wandering stranger

Cerebrate Fate, I kinda disagree. There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but with over 15,000 words, I think even after proof reading it's to be expected there would be one here and there.

Also, I don't think this chapter should have had more Noah. This chapter was dedicated to Dr. Michaels, and the parts with Noah and Iota were just to remind us of where they are at right now, and not provide any new developments. I think this chapter served that purpose well, and Noah will get his chapter (again) later on as well.

Holy typewriters batman! I can see why it took so long <_<

It is so beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's to beautiful to be real. *stabs eyes* it is, It is real. Yessss, God bless this day.

drunk and crying blood
Feel-good-ologist
Doctor T

great new chappie!! *hugs lota*