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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Why was she raped at all...or even blinded?
wEll written but the question of why this went down bothers me.
wEll written but the question of why this went down bothers me.
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW. This was great!
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bravo, honestly, I don't see why people can't have the balls to write more obscure stories like this one.
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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just...wow. Can't say I didn't like it, though. You write well. Thanks.
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.o odd thought not a bad story... rape isent my fav but was still a good story
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shinkouhyou recommended me to you, her little protege. She speaks highly of you as a writer, I'll have you know. I see that she wasn't wrong. But I believe you will do well under her wing. Nicely written.
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this fic very, very much. Not much you can do to improve it. Keep up the good work!
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Usually I don't leave comments, but the fact that this was a great piece of fiction and sad pandas are my ultimate weakness, I had to leave at least a short one. So I'm off to go check out your full FF and see what the whole thing is about. Great job, can't wait to read moar.
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sadistic, crazy, and in the end, all you can do it pity. Pity, pity, pity.
I loved it.
Also, I read this for two reasons:
1. Common Courtesy: You read/reviewed me, so I felt inclined to do likewise.
2. There seems to be a lack of good rape stories on AFF. I don't approve of rape or anything, but this is a story, with imaginary characters, so that makes it accetpable.
But like I said earlier, I enjoyed this story very much. Hope you right some more stuff in the future!
I loved it.
Also, I read this for two reasons:
1. Common Courtesy: You read/reviewed me, so I felt inclined to do likewise.
2. There seems to be a lack of good rape stories on AFF. I don't approve of rape or anything, but this is a story, with imaginary characters, so that makes it accetpable.
But like I said earlier, I enjoyed this story very much. Hope you right some more stuff in the future!
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello shika t.i hope i did not offended you by telling that you should have wrote a reason.i was just making a comment on how you should have writted.i really apreciate your story thought,unlike other jerks that posted comments, demanding you to writte more chapters,not knowing that is hard for you too to writte a story without a mistake.just take your time and writte whenever you are ready.just like i said before, you will become a great writter.dont let this idiots bother you.
with tons of friendship,
Sliffer
with tons of friendship,
Sliffer