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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, this was a little harsh this fic.may did nothing to be raped.you should at least written a better reason of she being raped than writting that she should remember that having sex with a pokemon is wonderful.you should have writte in place of this that he was an enemy of her father or a team aqua that wanted revenge on her father and decided to take the revenge on may.anywai this fic is very wonderful and i congragulate you.writte a better fic,okay
you are going to be the best writter.
you are going to be the best writter.
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I will most certianly read it when you post this fic! A really great job ^^
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story it made so that you could feel Mays pain and know her problems.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved the story and can't wait for more
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That sounds great. I liked the story, and it sounded like you were a good writer (good, wtf am i saying? more like excellent! Developed, that's for sure.) so this sounds like it is going to be a welcome addition. Ty --
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Is the blinding permenant. I eagerly await your full version. (hopefully with tons of sex).
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off, i love this oneshot. I can't wait to read the actual story, and i pray you write more of these AFF chapters
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There is a saying..
That saying is MOAR.
That saying is MOAR.
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*is floating on his back in the air*
*Sigh* I truly hate rape, but for the life of me i can't stop reading these fics. This was a good side to your main story, which i intend to check out later. Not to mention that blinding the victim is definetly a twist i've never seen like this. Nice job.
*Sigh* I truly hate rape, but for the life of me i can't stop reading these fics. This was a good side to your main story, which i intend to check out later. Not to mention that blinding the victim is definetly a twist i've never seen like this. Nice job.
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a pretty good story. Very well written and with an interesting plot. I would really like to read that story you mentioned in your summary. Is there any chance you could add a link to that story or something that tells us where to find it?