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This is the firs time ever that I am actually sad that a fanfic ended. Honestly, your fanfic has been one of the BEST Matt x Mello fanfics that I have ever read. And hands down, you protrayed their relationship better than anyone else I've ever read. It was a wonderful, beautifully written, well thought out story.

I think you should post this story on fanfiction.net
Because it doesnt seem like you are getting a lot of readers here, which I know that you deserve so many more readers. Good job and I hope you write another Matt x Mello fanfic, probably an AU, so they dont have to die. XD

Hi!!^^
I'm reading, still in chap 15 but yeah...I'm on it.
Matt's Spanish? Wow I'm too LOL Actually I odn't think Jeevas could never be a spanish name (I can't think of any spanish word with "ee" in it), but it was cute ^o^ We're seeing a nicer, less sadistic side of Mello in this chapters. It's good (although I loved the roughness like woah).

Keep up the nice work!

Hi. :D

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No 'ee' in Spanish? :( My thinking is here: http://mrsjeevas.livejournal.com/1016.html?thread=760#t760, which is how I came to the conclusion that he's Spanish.

As for Mello, that's a mixture of Morgie taking me under her wing and teaching me what a Mello is; and the natural arch of the story. I keep stopping and thinking, 'Imagine being Mello right now! Dude thinks he pwns Near, which means that right now, he thinks he's the only person standing between Kira and Kira's world domination; then he's got added pressures of Matt being Matt; add to that pure Mello angst...' I figured it's not so much being calmer, as forcing himself to be so, as he feels like he's managing everything. It's not like the Mafia, when you can just bark orders and they'll get done. He can still bark the orders and they'll get done, but then he'll have to put up with Matt being moody afterwards.

Poor lamb.

I really enjoyed "It Matters" and now this series. You write very graphically and the descriptions are well constructed. I really hope you are going to write more. Thanks

Thank you very much. *all grins*

Love it.I really hope yo'r continueing this soon cause otherwise I'd have the same problem Matt had at the airplane XD
Oh and how cute was the safeword?? It made me giggle.

I'm recommending thi fic (and the prequel) to everyone ^^

((BTW, please!! don't read my stuff XDD I'm a bit ashamed ^^U))

Too late. :D

I enjoy your stories and your English is extremely good. I'm also looking at your pwnage art. Nice one! :D

Thank you for telling people about me. *little shivery grin because it is lovely to have your stuff read, even if you writing it because it's fun*

Cute!! We should though, no one seems to anymore but us... lol
Maybe we can even work together in the future!! I really want to do
an Mpreg... but I always need someone to help keep me from just
making the characters tear their clothes off and fux!! lol

That could work. :p

You realize that the LxLight pairing is supposed to pwn MattxMello, through sheer quantity, but there's only 10 more there than here.