rate_review Reviews

Wow, this one had a very good concept. In this short story, you utilized part of him with out adding anything else and kept D and the symbiont in character. I came twice while reading this story. It was hard to get to the end without breathing heavily. That's never happened to me while reading anyone's fanstories other than my own.

My only hang up with this story was the change in tenses. First it was in past tense, then present, then past, etc. Fix that and you have one hell of a story there!

Thank you!

Freaky, funny and well written. Even the stilted places are true (at least to the translation I've read) to the original. I can just imagine the poor parasite with a dick down his... arm? Okay, so I can't imagine it. Again, this get the freaky, funny award!

AAARGH!!!!
I LOVE YOU XD

I though no-one was going to update here anymore

Thank your for your hard work

That was....wow.....distrubing and yet.....good. Very odd and yet..hot...

I wonder if that would be a handjob or a blowjob?