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August 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You can write as much as you want, Garnet. But you can't write for shit if you can't even spell a single "Yeah" correctly. It's not fucking "ya", it's not fucking "yea", and it DEFINITELY IS NOT "yeh", so go back and fix that shit. This is a good story but by god if you can't fix a single mistake, a simple, basic, elementary mistake, then why the hell are you writing this in the first place?
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March 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well i have no idea of the pokefandom scene, i just stumbled upon this story, so is this author / scene is dead and nothing is written anymore, please foregive me!
To your story, a very very nice read, its a shame you stopped at the best part, i really do hope that you will continue this and write more chapters!
Hoping for more chapters!!!!!!!!!!
Done let this end!
To your story, a very very nice read, its a shame you stopped at the best part, i really do hope that you will continue this and write more chapters!
Hoping for more chapters!!!!!!!!!!
Done let this end!
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September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. just thank you. I never...not that i can think of in any unpublished series, found such joys in a realistic retelling of my favorite game. its truly a work of pure art. Thank you, for truly making me fall in love with your writing.
youve given a depressed person soem joy in life
youve given a depressed person soem joy in life
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update. Can't wait for more to come.
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February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Legit. Great use of Macho Brace and the description of it. I hadn't read this in forever, and I had to double back at one point and remember which story I was reading. XD
And do I detect shades of "I yam a scientist" with Yuki? :D
And do I detect shades of "I yam a scientist" with Yuki? :D
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Newest chapter was very nice.
I only wish you had as much free time as I do, then you'd be done with the next chapter in a couple days.
I only wish you had as much free time as I do, then you'd be done with the next chapter in a couple days.
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally caught up, I now need to say it's quite an exciting and gripping tale. Pretty much everything about it is good: the mystery of what will happen to Luna once she obtains all of the plates; the excitement and anxiety of the battles; the interactions between all the characters, especially Luna and Noah; and the exact intents of not only Cyrus, but High Noon and so on. Lots of possibilities.
No major problems, just some grammar errors that are infrequent, but they don't detract from the story in any way.
A well deserved five star rating is bestowed upon you, good sir!
No major problems, just some grammar errors that are infrequent, but they don't detract from the story in any way.
A well deserved five star rating is bestowed upon you, good sir!
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December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Honestly love the time you've put into growing Luna's and Noah's relationship. Adds real depth to the story.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Playing the waiting game isn't very fun. XD
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Playing the waiting game isn't very fun. XD
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July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the more you update the more i love you
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July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey man! I've been missing from this story but now that I've read it all I can't figure out why I ever left. Hooray for Mawile! ^_^
My story's done, so check it out when you get some time!
My story's done, so check it out when you get some time!