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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. As always. I look forward to chapter 10 (:
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Warrrg moar damnit.
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, finally getting a chance to leave a review. I read the chapter a couple days ago.
...don't really know what to say. Good stuff, as usual. Can't wait for the next action-packed installment :D
...don't really know what to say. Good stuff, as usual. Can't wait for the next action-packed installment :D
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter - keep them coming :D
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving the way these two characters interract. I never expected the love interest to be a Zangoose :P
This story really should have more exposure than it does, though I suppose when the lemon starts flowing, it'll find it's way onto a chan and the chan will find its way here.
Every Anon loves pokemon, no matter how much they yell about it :P
Also, damn your education. Write this full time pl0x.
This story really should have more exposure than it does, though I suppose when the lemon starts flowing, it'll find it's way onto a chan and the chan will find its way here.
Every Anon loves pokemon, no matter how much they yell about it :P
Also, damn your education. Write this full time pl0x.
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool little introduction. Do I smell a pairing? ;o
The dialogue looks good to me.
The dialogue looks good to me.
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap.
Man, I haven't read anything this interesting in a while. This is really, really good stuff. I'm so glad to see Cyrus is actually, y'know, evil, rather than the wuss-boy he is in the game, LET'S TAKE OVER THE WORLD WITH A MURKROW LOL
Top notch stuff. Really. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Man, I haven't read anything this interesting in a while. This is really, really good stuff. I'm so glad to see Cyrus is actually, y'know, evil, rather than the wuss-boy he is in the game, LET'S TAKE OVER THE WORLD WITH A MURKROW LOL
Top notch stuff. Really. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well shit, your killing off just about everyone huh? Goddamn this is one hell of a read. MOAR DAMMIT, i need moar!
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Genuinely frightening. I've never seen an author with so much disregard for life who still manages to make a story and its characters believable and familiar.
I look forward to the next chapter (:
I look forward to the next chapter (:
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear god this story has given me chills.
I must say, very interesting story you have so far. Dark, creepy, and already very confusing (in a good way).
Looking forward to future updates, if just so i can figure out what the hell is going on.
Great work man.
I must say, very interesting story you have so far. Dark, creepy, and already very confusing (in a good way).
Looking forward to future updates, if just so i can figure out what the hell is going on.
Great work man.