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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man... This is such a sad chapter. It started out good, but just turned sad. Poor Noah... Sure hope you update soon.
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
And Noah's world comes crashing down...
I enjoyed reading this a lot. The battle was well-written. Good to see that Pokemon aren't immune to bleeding and the like ;o
It's coming along very nicely. Is this the end of the prologue?
And Noah's world comes crashing down...
I enjoyed reading this a lot. The battle was well-written. Good to see that Pokemon aren't immune to bleeding and the like ;o
It's coming along very nicely. Is this the end of the prologue?
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Attention writer, this story is very tragic. I cannot wait for this to continue :D
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. I was kinda looking forward to a battle, but I guess that'll give me even more reason to come back and check out the next installment.
Fire does not beat Water.
Soul Plate, huh? That's certainly new... obviously it's gotta have some kind of effect on the story.
I don't mind the lengthy prologue. Background is important! Keep up the good work.
Fire does not beat Water.
Soul Plate, huh? That's certainly new... obviously it's gotta have some kind of effect on the story.
I don't mind the lengthy prologue. Background is important! Keep up the good work.
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was super speacial Awesome! Can't wait for the next.
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I know this story is going somewhere, but I'm not sure where it's going exactly. I couldn't understand who or what this "friend" is, and where all of this is taking place. But all this makes me wanna know more about that Pokemon. Looking foward to reading the next chapter.
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Freaky, but really good. This chapter sent chills up my spine as I read it. Please write more!
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very cool read. It will be quite interesting to see how this story develops. I anxiously await the next chapter. :)