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Just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed this story. I only came across it after it was completed, and I'm so glad I could read the whole thing all at once, as I would have hated having to wait for updates - the story was just so good. Going to check out your other stuff now. *glomps*

I really enjoyed this fic. It's diffently one of my most favorite, it was beautifully written and very compelling.

American white girl here who's made onigiri before. o3o^

You're supposed to wet your hands so that the rice doesn't stick to you, and I seriously doubt that the onigiri would taste any good without salting your hands also. xD

When you mush it into a ball the salt melts on the rice and stabilizes the entire thing so it wont fall apart (hopefully).

And the rice is already moist (and hot) when you're holding it so wetting the seaweed is totally unnecessary. Actually I'm sure if you DID so that then then it would be even more likely to tear.

Just felt like sharing some knowledge. :'3

I'm liking the fic too, btw. ;'D

Something I found funny was "American Secret Service." I may not know whether it's real or fake since I don't live in America, but it sort of... passed to me as dropping hints of sexual innuendo[s].

What I'm saying? "...If that were to form an acronym..."

I found that funny.

"...! XD"

Hi, I know this is a bit rude of me, but your chapter warnings said that there were spoilers. can I jsut ask, before I read, if there are spoilers for anything after the tenth volume of the manga? Cause this story looks really successful, so it must be good and I want to read it, but I don't want to get eny nasty surprises either... So, my email is mypheonixfire@hotmail.com could you please email me to say whether or not I should be able to read this? Thank you for your time. xxx

Alright so checking in here at chapter 24! God you update fast, I want to hug you! Aaah I'm trying to remember all the things I wanted to comment about... I liked how the picture thing was resolved (at least partly?) :) I wouldn't mind a set of those photos myself XD But who was taking them and who were the negatives sold to? Is that going to be something important later on?

Love the fact that Near was Kira! XD I've already mentioned, I don't like that little bastard. But wow, the Kira-Arc got a little confusing for me. Good thing you broke it down at the end of chapter 24 :) I had no idea that Near was going to be Kira! Pfft, but he was like a baby-Kira. L and Light thoroughly owned his ass. Even Ryuk was fooled XD I was feeling betrayed though when Light told Mello and Matt he was going to help them. So the Kira-arc overall was very elaborate and expertly pulled off!

Is Soichiro going to be okay? I mean how freakin weird is that that he gets hit by a car :( He's not one of my favorite characters but still... I hope he pulls through.

Oh, I almost forgot to mention! My favorite part was definitely the explanation that all the task force, Mello, Matt, and Light were wired up to take a false heart-attack! I don't know why, I just found that hilarious. I'm surprised no-one hit Matsuda's XD Well I'm gonna go finish up the next two chapters. Thanks so much for the quick updates!

That was actually a really nice, clean way to wrap up Law and Right, I think :) I'm sad to see such a good fic end... but I really enjoyed the ride! The fluff was a nice touch XD I love fluff, no matter how corny. Thanks for all the hard work you've put into this :) I'll keep an eye out for any more of your fics!

Yes I followed the story till the end. And for me the identity of Kira came as a surprise. I did have a slight suspicion of him when L asked him to join since he is of the 'keep your friends close but enemies closer' type and when he started to give a lot of information to his Watari. Usually it is the other way around. I have to say you completely fooled me with Ryuk in the van and I really thought one of them was Kira. I'm glad it turned out to be Near. I do have a question though. Was it Near who bought the negatives for the pictures? And if not then who did? (perhaps an idea for a sequel?) Loved your story.

TenshiHaku

I get super excited whenever I check AFFN and find that Law and Right's been updated :D

How did Near get a monitor of L and Light's bedroom?! Near's such a creep, I've never liked his character D:< So for now, L thinks the new Kira's gotta be one of his heirs because they want him to 'decide'? And I loved how you explained L's name only being one letter. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

oooh. its beautiful. just beautiful. Please update soon.