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Yes I am still following the story. Even if it slowed down I don't mind a bit since the chapters are still pretty big and you still seem to update daily.I like how you gently eas into this new plot.Having Light meet Sayu was a real surprise! And I can understand her being angry but not to angry. (after all she just got her brother back after thinking he was dead for 6 years) I think I would have reacted the same if I was her. I'm still curious about the new kira. We still don't know to much about him/her. All I hope is that it doesn't turn out to be Sayu. This fic is still great keep it up!

Tenshihaku

Yeah new chapter me happy! That was a twist, Light's sister huh? Interesting. I can't wait to see where this goes.
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Al I can say is you're the best! I love your story! It is so rare to find a story with a good plot, decent chapter size, and that doesn't move to fast but you're doing it.I really like how you didn't skip the healing of Light from the rape like a lot of authors do. I find it makes the story a little hard to follow. And you really keep Light in character even though he has changed a little but I just find it shows the change because of the rape. This is aslo something a lot of authors tend to forget, after being raped you'll never be completely the same again. And I have a feeling Light is not completely over it yet. I look forward to read more of the story.

TenshiHaku

Awesome chapters. I like this story very much. I can't wait to find out who the next Kira is. I'm hoping for Teru.
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um... WOW. I've read a lot of raped!Light fics before but this is... WOW!!! I mean, you go through the whole healing process and then BEYOND it!! Law and Right is simply amazing and I never want it to end XD Most rape-fics just end with Light somewhat getting over the rape but then you went and threw in another Kira!!! Holy crap! I seriously did NOT see that coming! I absolutely love how you wrote the slow build-up of trust between L and Light. I'd go on but if I point out everything I love about Law and Right I'd basically just be giving you a recap of the whole freakin story XD I'm just like blown away with how good L&R is and I can't wait to read more :) Thank you for all the effort you've put into writing this fic!

Ok, the last two chapters were just so, so...... HILARIOUS!! L+Cake= worried Watari??!! Ahhhh... that hurt my funny bone *wipes happy tear* ANywho, nice character development so far. It's nice to take a few breaks from the drama sometimes to show that our boys still have emotions in them that don't always lead to angst (ee gods I hate that word) Keep it up, while I eat this unfortunate onigiri (mine always come out square), with a candied plum of course. I tired it with a pickled one once.... I don't recomend it... ~F.W.

Thank you once again for replying to my review. I enjoy the feedback almost as much as I enjoy your story! Chapter 10 and 11 were WONDERFUL. Light's meltdown was a masterpiece of pieces of, well, glass actually.... but yeah!! Heheh. So sorry! In the States, we have this wonderful little engery drink called BAWLS, which is filled with guarana. I'm on a power sugar rush like you have no idea... when did my speech get so impaired? Anyways, I've had cucumbere kimche, and though it was very good, thesaucekindacameoutfunnyandisitjustmeoramIramblingon.. OH HEY BOYS-- ah!! *whomp!*
Light: I thought you were supposed to be reviewing...
L: I believe she is trying, Light-kun, she is merely Retardedly And Intoxicatling Talking On... and she appears to have tripped on her drinking bottle...
Light: Retardedly And Intoxicatingly Talking On.... very funny L.
L: Light-kun states the obvious, considering the aformentioned words spell out his name.
Light: Yes well.... wait... they what?? *examines words* HEYYY!!!
L: Frozen-san would like to make me a cake now??
FW: *twitch* Mmm... more BAWLS please...
L and Light: .........

O.o..........3 chapters... in 24 hours added? AND they continue to impress me? You, my plot-high-bunny fiend, have got my attention. Let's look at chapter 3. MisaMisa surprised me by almost giving up on her Light-kun. It almost through me off, until Ryuuzaki came in and ruined the moment. Nice save. This IS all about the boys now. But I appreciated the sentiment that, though Light still doesn't care much for Misa, he cared ENOUGH to tell her to enjoy the rest of her life (which probably isn't very long anyways, but hell, she's ANNOYING). Chapter 4 FREAKED ME OUT!!! Light put to death???? I was close to tears T.T But another chapter later reunites with our God-plexed super-not-really-genious. It was sweet and longlived, but L starts to show his compassionate side for Light (Raito, J, Toshiro, Yagami-kun, etc.), and Light indeed starts to open up! Im awaiting future chapters from you my dear!!! A devoted follower. ~F.W.

You know, I've read at least twenty rape fics (between AFF and FF), and they were good, but mediocre. Momentum Mori (if you've read it; I suggest it) was one of my favs and the first one I've read. I congradulate you for rising above the mediocre. You have the potential to make this one of the best fics I will ever bestow my eyes upon. The first chapter almost turned me away. I'm so used to authors describing the scene the way you portrayed: cold, dark, raining, pain, blood; and of course this all makes sense, but I tend to dislike routine. But as I kept going, Light's character stayed just that... in character. The second chapter is always a challenge because, Light's been raped, now comes L's reaction. I liked the point in where a thorough physical came in, so we don't have to go through mindless chapters in where L needs to figure out why Light's demeanor has changed. It was straight and to the point; very puntial and I liked it. And finally (hope you enjoyed the review) I enjoyed how, even though Light was raped, L stiil furfills his role as a detective and enlightens the teen he is arrested for being Kira. Please continue to update, as I will be looking on with hopeful thoughts.