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for A fight of passion

by kishusbabe

person LyeLye
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Unfortunately it was set up rather badly and very short, you should put spaces between the sentences, that way it will make it easier to read. Also add more detail and depth.
person moviefan
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kishu/Ichigo stories are so much better than Ryou/Ichigo or Masaya/Ichigo

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