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by horrorgal

schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God, that was so amazingly well written and so extremely hot. You described everything so well, and it was so easy to visualize it. I loved that you added in that either men would be willing to top or bottom with each other. I love when my boys are willing to share roles, rather then stick to specifics likes 'seme' or 'uke'.

You really expressed the deep bond between Hakkai and Gojyo really well, and made it easy to feel how that bond would make their lovemaking even more sweet. And holy mother of-...Hakkai makes just a delictable image. Sprawled out on his back on the bed under Gojyo, hair lying about haphazardly and cheeks flushed pink as his face is one of pure ecstacy. Mmm...mmm...mmmmmm. Damn, I wanna draw that. Really badly. =D (i must admit, though I love role switching, I'm quite fond of uke Hakkai. ^^')

And yay! Another person who loves FF8 like I do. I get so annoyed at all the people who hate on it. It's a good game! *huggles you and her Seifer and Zell*
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squees* beautiful and sexy! More please!
person yellow22
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I reread this story again. It is so great & well written. Please do more Saiyuki.
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot, intense and delicious. I fear I will be useless for the remainder of the afternoon. Excellent job. More plz?
person orvida
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If this is your first story you did one hell of a job their both in character when it comes to dealing with each others feelings and, I love how you did not rush you let their feeling develop gradually over a drink and small talk and that is why i find it funny that you say this is your first story you seem like a pro to me when you write about them so smoothly it just blends in like a piece of a jigsaw puzzle. I take my hat off to you. You did a hell of a job and i look forward to reading more stories from you in the near furture about these 2 men. of course i'm a 39 person myself but i love them all.
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, this is so adorable and sweet! Beautiful descriptions and imagery. More please.
person Dambae
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Reels* That was delectable. The writing was phenomenal, the descriptions were deep, and the porn was delicious. I look forward to reading more of your stories!

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