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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story. I want to know what happens next.
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice please continue
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Look here, I like your story it is a very unusual and original story, though your spelling is absolutely disastrous. please clean and edit it. For with decent spelling it go up from fairly nice to really good.I do not want wish to flame you, it is just that I see a nice story and then when reading it crawls with grammar and spelling mistakes, and that just takes so much fun out of the story when reading it. I though hope though that you will continue this story for it seems as though this could still go a very long wa, and I am looking forward to a continuation
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September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy shhit that was so hot!
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god. that is so hot.
p.s. go misty.
p.s. go misty.
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Please continue.
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is..omg...im am so turned on!