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by KittyNeko

person Anon
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story i cant wait for the update@ plz hurry!
person yamapifan
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is SOOOOOO amazing! i'm really glad that i found it, and i seriously wish you would continue! thank you so much for writing it!
person L0VER
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww, still no update? :(
person LadyE
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story about how they first met! If I were Sakura I'd smash his face in the plate too! After having some similar experiences with parents going bump in the night... let's just say Sakura has much better luck than I did... awkward is a pretty inadequate word for how you feel the next morning, and the morning after that! lol

Anyways, this chapter was quite a bit more serious than the others despite the wealth of well-timed comic relief (I love your Touya/Sakura interactions!) Now I wonder if Nadesico's father and the whole situation will influence the story as a whole, or if it really will focus on the Sakura/Syaoran/Tomoyo triangle I'd been expecting, which now seems to be including Eriol in a square. Maybe both? Whichever it is, it's sure to be one great story!

Loving this fic to pieces! Keep it up!

person L0VER
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww, my hearts breaking for li. s'hard to see someone yu like flat out say their not interested and going out with someone else. :(:(, I hope everything works out. Sakura's mom seems nice.. hopefully she'll understand. UPDATE SOON! i check everyday.. lol
person L0VER
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW, i'm supprised there so little reviews. cause GIRL, this story is GREEEEEEEEAT. i love it, simply love it. Especially when li said he wont give up. cause usually its "he gives up and she starts making the moves" etcetc. but great tension there. and making out in the same tent with touya? mmMmmm.. riskay. i cant wait to find the reaction of the family when they find out.. or the reaction of tomoyo. :\ . i personally dont think tomoyo should mind. And she sounds so mean here! Lol. she's way nicer in the show.. at least... how i recall . :) update soon! pLEASE. i'll be checking everyday. LOL
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. Its honestly, one of the best i've read. I like how the characters seem real, like how Sakura, instead of being 'perfect little sakura-chan' she's more rough around the edges. Great story. Please continue!
person Liz
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that story was absolutely awesome! i loved it! i can't wait to read more! please keep up the good work, i can't wait to read what happens next!
person LadyE
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You've got a great story here. It's so ridiculously hilarious that I can't help but laugh out loud and so erotically intoxicating that I just can't stop reading. There are a few grammatical errors in some chapters that I have noticed, but they are few and far between. You are a talented writer, and I for one am glad that I came across this story. It's a pity that you don't have more reviewers, but you've found one in me. Keep up the good work!

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