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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello i just read chpt 6 and i must say its pretty good so far. you know your pokes xP
but i guess you want a review, so here goes: i thought the begining was a bit weird with the team rocket smut, and im hoping you build up to at least a few more scenes with misty or somethin(may would be a pretty cool one nite when ash visits...im just saying)
i like where the character devel. is headed cept for tracey, i wanna punch him in the nose. but im on my psp so im out of letters so bye for now!
Michael
but i guess you want a review, so here goes: i thought the begining was a bit weird with the team rocket smut, and im hoping you build up to at least a few more scenes with misty or somethin(may would be a pretty cool one nite when ash visits...im just saying)
i like where the character devel. is headed cept for tracey, i wanna punch him in the nose. but im on my psp so im out of letters so bye for now!
Michael
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about not reviewing before. Still better late than never, eh. I absolutely adore this fic. 5 stars
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good. :3
I like your writing style.
I like your writing style.
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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Terrible title, but very intriguing premise, and very well written. Looking forward to more! Onward!
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start here. Can't wait to see what all Giovanni has up his sleeve for Ash and Co.