rate_review Reviews

you're right. the BDSM community would be ashamed. and a little grossed out...

I think I've gone into shock. Justin, that was one of the most unique MattxMello fanfictions that I have read. The sex scenes were incredibly hot; the characterisation was spot on; there was nothing not feasible when compared with the canon; and wow! You are the first person I've ever known to portray Matt as Kira!

I'm a huge Matt fangirl, so my emotions are ringing out 'Nooooooooooo!', but that still doesn't detract from the fact that you've crafted an amazing story. I do have to say that I sussed with the first mention of the Kira files, and Matt pulling Mello off them, that it was ultimately going to end as it did. I don't know whether that was intentional, or you might need to make it slightly more ambiguous.

I'm looking forward to the next installment so much.

i think i understand your reasoning behind the characterization now. what i meant before was that mello in the manga and anime had such a bad inferiority complex that it was hard for me to see him willingly submitting to anyone especially under such humiliating circumstances. is that more clear? i sometimes have a hard time putting my thoughts into words.
anyway, like i said before, you write beautifully and i always look forward to reading more.

i love all your stories. when i was reading the others, i couldn't wait for the next chapter to come and i was really excited that you decided to go into mello and matt's story. the only thing is that mello seems so out of character. i have a hard time picturing him like this. he almost seems pathetic and matt seems so cruel. i really do love the way you write though. keep up the good work!

I'm enjoying this, but I'll have to find your earlier stories, so I can catch up. You do a great job of spelling out what happened for us noobs, but the implications are still that I want to read those stories.

Your characterisation of Mello is really well done, though I don't feel like we've quite 'met' Matt yet. Mostly because there hasn't been a Matt POV yet. The perspective so far has been spot on though.

Eagerly awaiting more!