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by phanwriter07

schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well let’s start off with, good for you getting your foot in the door. One of the hardest things a person can do is write a story and then put it out there for everyone to R&R. now for the story itself. I think that it so far is a good story but not a great one ONLY because we have not gotten to the actual plot yet, I think it can have the making of a great story but we haven't really seen enough yet. I personally look forward to where this may go, so if you keep writing I will keep reviewing. Oh and before I forget THANK YOU for using spell check/correct grammar, it makes it so much easier to read.
-C.

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