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zoro you bastard, you better not hurt nami or else you'll face the darkness himself.... whoa ha..ha..haha....
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this story has been posted years ago and still have no ending.... but I'm glad Miss confession haven't deleted it :)
I'll wait for the next chapter Miss confession.....
i love D, i can relate to his pain :_(
a lot of people can only see the things you do and criticize you so fast but
only a few can understand why you do the things you've done... 0_o

I really like this spin off from 'Crossed'. I would like to know how Luffy will react when he finds out that Nami is pregnant.
I wonder why you're not continuing the story though. I've seen on FanFiction.org that you've written many stories after this. Have you lost interest in this story or do you not know how to continue? It would be nice to know what's going on.

This story is so good! I have read a lot of your stories on FFnet and saw that the sequel for Crossed was here. I really hope you'll continue soon as I love what you've done with the characters.

This is one of the sequels I had imagine after I read the "Crossed" and I'm very happy with this sequel. Now I wonder what will happen. I hope you will update soon.

I love this story and I have a feeling I know who took her can't wait for the next chapter

I hope you didn't abandon this story and you'll come up with new chapters eventually :) I'm looking forward~ Love D. ^^

Please continue this story. It is written so well and has such an addicting plot! I thoroughly enjoy it :)

this story is amazing. best luffy/nami ive read, ever.
i like how the story is progressing..
i love the way you portray luffy... (his body kekekekeh)
thank you so much for these chapters!
please try your ultimate best to release the next chapter! yeahh!
may i say that i love you for this wonderful story?
im all tearing up because this is one of the most rare good fanfictions that ive been trying to find and read...
a jewel out of dirt! yes, that's what this story is..
thank you sooo much! ;)
(gimmi more of the sexy luffy!)

Yipee!!! I'm so glad you updated!
Oh my gosh! Zoro!??? After all if this is another alternate OP world then the crew is definitely also in this world.
Please update soon, I would love to read the next chapter.

PS: I know you said this fic is not FF.net material but between all the fics I've read here, it also doesn't fit here since this story offers more quality than the story posted here. It's not just sex, sex and sex, the story and character development have quality substance that deserve to be read by a variety of audience. You should try posting this on FF.net so other people can read it, if you're worried about the adult content I've read more bizarre, violent and disturbing fics in FF.net than this story (I meant no offense on that) just put a big bold warning sign on each chapter about the adult content if the rating of the fic doesn't work on warning the readers. I hope you consider it, it's a waste of a beautiful story if the only people who read it are people who go to this site.

coucou ta fic est bien mais quand vas tu mettre la suite ?