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i can definately see why you don't post this on FFNet... damn that's one dark story, and why do i have the feeling it's going to get darker

I can definately understand Luffy though, if i had gone through even half of what he did i would have gone insane to... poor kid

Nami i feel really bad about i assume it was Arlong that raped her first, makes me real glad that he's already dead, bastards like that deserve it

ooh this is really good, i really feel sorry for Luffy, but at the same time he is such a jerk. i hope Nami can make him better. i wonder where they are going, back to cocoyashi? or somewhere else? i hope you are able to update this soon though i know you've been busy with Blood of my Enemy on FF.Net but i would like to see just who the woman is that helps little Luffy out and what happens with Nami and Luffy.

Finally you did it! Yeah! I won the battle xD Good, so then you're going to write the next chapters for your other stories and after that you immediately will continue with this, right?? :D

The chapter was ... aaaaah, stupid D >.< Why has he to do that? Poor Nami! She hasn't done anything and he treats her that way, actually she gave him what he wanted and he still is just a dumbass!!! I like him though x3 But really poor Nami.
It was kinda too short though xD Too less LuNa in it.

And yeeah, little Luffy go for it. Kill those psychos they didn't deserve anythng else!! No they didn't! Maybe he should talk about it with Nami and he could forget it or maybe it wouldn't bother him that much. But yeah, like hell he would talk to Nami about it. Idiot! -.-

But who is the girl with green eyes?
Naaaaah, come on, it was really toooooo short xD

I forgot to mention. So now I'm sure that Luffy won't leave Nami. Yeeeeeesa! That's what I wanted anyways xD
He is just too addicted to his drug, existing only once in his world and for him anyway. And Nami isn't that stupid to leave him either, but like she said in last chapter, it was better for her to stay by his side. Haach, just go ooon xD

Hey

The story is awesome!! Really awesome and I like D as well. He is so much different from the other Luffys but then again he IS Luffy.
I hope you go on with the story, because it's really great! And I want to know how it goes on. What happens between Nami and him. And if he leaves her or not. He really could do, but then Nami gets trouble with some guys and he would save her every time, wouldn't he?
So, come on, write moo~ore!

I registered today just to review your story! ;)

I've been a AFF lurker for years but never joined till now. I wanted to make sure you get all the support you deserve for this story.
I'm very happy you decided to do D's story. He's a very interesting character and I can see that he is a very damaged soul and so is his Nami. I wonder if the others are gonna be like that to. His world is like the complete opposite of Our Luffy's world.

Do remember to continue this story and update soon. I'm only on ch2 right now but it doesn't take me very long to read through chapters.
Thanks Again for this and other wonderful stories that you have made. You are very talented.

SUpa!!!!!!


Our! I'm loving your excellent fic ^ ^
Thank you for writing ^ ^

bye kiss^^

Aww, I love seeing his moments of vulnerability <3 He is a good person somewhere deep, deep, DEEP down.

Of course, I doubt their relationship could ever have any semblance of normality, but I do hope he has enough sense to see that she does care about him.

Wow I fell like I've read this before.

Oh wait I have or at least the parts of the "present".

Mmm...ending....