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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
besides some misspelling errors and the usual 'picky about rape' stories, it was actually done decently.
The only thing missing was Near heh. But I did like the interaction between matt and L to a t.
well continue I guess
The only thing missing was Near heh. But I did like the interaction between matt and L to a t.
well continue I guess
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please make more.....there needs to be more than raitoxL and melloxmatt (even though I like both ^_^)
everyone isn't too ooc and what not....but I need to read it again because I read it in a rush and I am kinda lazy today -.-;
it's STILL GOOD lol
everyone isn't too ooc and what not....but I need to read it again because I read it in a rush and I am kinda lazy today -.-;
it's STILL GOOD lol
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh.. It's pretty good overall, a couple of spelling errors, but nothing major. And Yes, your assumption is right, for it is your RP partner here. :D
The adaptation is coming along well so far and I can't wait to see the next parts, as well as continuing the story with you.
The adaptation is coming along well so far and I can't wait to see the next parts, as well as continuing the story with you.