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Well that was ... disturbing. Not entirely sure why I clicked on this, but it was an interesting read. (Oh, you might want to clear your browsing history before someone thinks you're thinking of offing yourself!) Very nasty Brock. Good story. SP

When are you going to update the story D:?? Its really good. Creepy and scary because of brock lol but really good.I love haow you put out real life facts as well. Very informative and informational.

I first found this fic YEARS ago back when I was still just a kid, but god it stuck with me. Enough to where I was inspired enough to find it again tonight, and ended up reading the rest of the chapters. This is just........ mind-blowing, its very obvious you put a lot of research and effort into this and it will probably always hold the record for "most fucked up thing I've ever read". Not that that's a bad thing by any stretch of the imagination; I'll be sure to recommend it to people looking for a messed up time or a ruined childhood. Honestly, just, Bravo, pat yourself on the back, because I am a connoisseur of disturbing fanfictions and this one stands above them all.

More please just one more chapter...............I want to know what happen's to Ash

Very well written. I hope you able to continue it.

I luvs this fanfic ;3 so much tortury goodness XD... I'm messed in the head but that's ok. Especially like the Paul/Ash moments. =P

Poor Ash... now, was he actually trying to kill himself? Or was it an accident? Or maybe he just took whatever helped at the moment without really caring?

Although I do have some misgivings about the occasionally mawkish and sentimental tone your story takes, I do like the amount of research that goes into depicting rape (and especially male on male rape), and the fact that the female characters, May and Dawn especially, are portrayed realistically and sympathetically: we are able to empathize with Dawn's confusion, and we sense that they both genuinely care about Ash, but simply do not know what to do.

its only a matter of time before the legendary pokemon figure out whats happening, and what brock is doing. im surprised latias hasn't appeared out of nowhere and murder brock yet. are legendary pokemon going to be in this?

Love... This... Story... to... DEATH!