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December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love !!! Your story is...wonderful !!! I like very much ! Please, more, i want the next chapter :3
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December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
MORE! you've definitely done your research. can't wait till the next chapter
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November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The only parts in this story that I don't really like is maybe the fact that May loves/likes Ash (or vise versa.)
But this story... is... very good.
Please keep the chapters coming!
But this story... is... very good.
Please keep the chapters coming!
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November 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ash fucked by an onix!? How would he be able to walk ever again?
This story is very well written and I'm enjoying the plot. I certainly hope there is more to come.
This story is very well written and I'm enjoying the plot. I certainly hope there is more to come.
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please upload more!
There were a few things I was confused about reading this though.. Mainly onix.
Onix is raping other trainers without Brock now? Or does Brock still have it?
Oh, and I see May might have a thing for Ash? Thats cute.
But for some reason I don't want them to be together in the end.
Aside from that... it was awesome.
Is there a poker scene coming up next? ?I can hardly wait.
There were a few things I was confused about reading this though.. Mainly onix.
Onix is raping other trainers without Brock now? Or does Brock still have it?
Oh, and I see May might have a thing for Ash? Thats cute.
But for some reason I don't want them to be together in the end.
Aside from that... it was awesome.
Is there a poker scene coming up next? ?I can hardly wait.
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September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe it... I came onto this site today to reread this story and it has 4 new chapters!!
Keep them coming. (no pun intended)
I'll have to keep popping in looking for more chapters every now and then.
Made my day.
Keep them coming. (no pun intended)
I'll have to keep popping in looking for more chapters every now and then.
Made my day.
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS A CHILDREN'S SHOW! How did you... Ash... Brock... And Paul? Why did you.... Why... Why did I enjoy it?
Hope the next few chapters are one their way! I'm ready for more.
Hope the next few chapters are one their way! I'm ready for more.
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August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is terrific so far! I'm astounded by how much research you put into these kinks! Most people only go by what they've heard on TV, and it shows. Keep it up~
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August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story, hope there will be more soon. mmmLook forward to reading the next episode. Hmmm. Who will they find inside? Gary? Professor Oak?
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August 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Will this be continued? It is horribly amazing so far.