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July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a brilliant story.
Will it be continued?
Will it be continued?
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July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was a little scared to read this at first but I read it and I love it.
Are you going to add any chapters in the future or is this it?
Anyway the four chapters that are up are a good read. Hope you decide to finish it cause it's one of the better stories on here (Even if it has hints of May liking Ash...)
Are you going to add any chapters in the future or is this it?
Anyway the four chapters that are up are a good read. Hope you decide to finish it cause it's one of the better stories on here (Even if it has hints of May liking Ash...)
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July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is good. You should let us in on that poker scene that Ash is so scared of.
Are you still updating?
Are you still updating?
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July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What is this? And why can't I stop reading?
I'm liking the plot. Glad you are kinda sticking with the episodes and added May! But she Loves him?... wait what?
Update soon!
I'm liking the plot. Glad you are kinda sticking with the episodes and added May! But she Loves him?... wait what?
Update soon!
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June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is dark, twisted, and just plain f***ed up, and for some reason I just cannot stop reading it. Good job.
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June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story was well written (as promised) and I never thought anyone would ever write anything like this!
I would like to hear about this poker incident!
Good to see it's being updated again.
I would like to hear about this poker incident!
Good to see it's being updated again.
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June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is... This is horrible but in a terribly good way!
Very exciting. Keep it coming!
Very exciting. Keep it coming!
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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing as usual!:D Keep it up!
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well if it's reviews you want!
This story is so sick it's great! I love the plot (and it makes me feel less like a pervert)
I always come on this website once a month to see if you've updated it or not.
Keep it up!
This story is so sick it's great! I love the plot (and it makes me feel less like a pervert)
I always come on this website once a month to see if you've updated it or not.
Keep it up!
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April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, new chapter ^-^ This story gives me faith that it doesn't matter how long a fic is left there is a chance it is continued. Anyway, I'm loving the story so far, everyone is IC apart from Brock (obviously). The Jennys are getting suspicious though...PLOT DEVELOPMENT FTW :D And poor Ash and the 'poker' incident D':
Keep Writing :D
Keep Writing :D