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March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Keep the chapters coming! I need to see what happens next!
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January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to keep an eye on this. Are you still writing it?
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December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor ash...
nevertheless, this is an excellent story, you should continue it!
nevertheless, this is an excellent story, you should continue it!
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November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a review of both chapters as a whole, really.
I came here by means of Topless Robot, a nerd news site with a fascination with posting sexual fanfiction, usually involving rape or gore, so the site runner Rob can make funny comments about the horrifying sexual acts. These fan-fictions have made me notoriously hard to shake or disturb.
So, onto this disgusting fan fic.
It's obvious the author is a talented writer, and it's obvious he gets his rocks off by thinking about gay anime rape. That's fine, we all have gross fetishes, most of us just don't plaster them on the internet.
From a technical standpoint, the story is quite good. It builds suspense and uses dialogue very cleverly. The bit about Onix fucking Ash was certainly disgusting, but thankfully did not go into detail (though the description of Onix's cum made me laugh out loud.) Brock's reimagining as a horrible manipulative bastard is excellently done, especially as all of it is explained. His threat to let Onix rape Dawn was chilling, and while the first chapter was disgusting, I look forward to reading the next chapter. I'll keep my eye on this story.
I came here by means of Topless Robot, a nerd news site with a fascination with posting sexual fanfiction, usually involving rape or gore, so the site runner Rob can make funny comments about the horrifying sexual acts. These fan-fictions have made me notoriously hard to shake or disturb.
So, onto this disgusting fan fic.
It's obvious the author is a talented writer, and it's obvious he gets his rocks off by thinking about gay anime rape. That's fine, we all have gross fetishes, most of us just don't plaster them on the internet.
From a technical standpoint, the story is quite good. It builds suspense and uses dialogue very cleverly. The bit about Onix fucking Ash was certainly disgusting, but thankfully did not go into detail (though the description of Onix's cum made me laugh out loud.) Brock's reimagining as a horrible manipulative bastard is excellently done, especially as all of it is explained. His threat to let Onix rape Dawn was chilling, and while the first chapter was disgusting, I look forward to reading the next chapter. I'll keep my eye on this story.
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October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter! In the cruelest way possible!
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October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to a chapter three!
...It wont take another few years will it?
This is just wow. Keep it up! Poor Ash.
...It wont take another few years will it?
This is just wow. Keep it up! Poor Ash.
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October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More please!
I couldn't believe it when I found this story again and it had a second chapter!
Please marry me!
I couldn't believe it when I found this story again and it had a second chapter!
Please marry me!
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September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow... This is disturbing, simply amazing. Grary's way OOC but i'm enjoying this I hope you update soon.
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August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well i'm totally wanting to see what happens the day and night after. (If you havn't written it already)
There are three words to describe how I felt after reading this story.
I love you.
There are three words to describe how I felt after reading this story.
I love you.
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April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i wanna se what happens :DDDDDDDD